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The Ballpit Ate My Pants by JonLovesChester

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From: lupi

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Date: 2006-03-06

Chapter: 1

ill never take my daughter to McDonalds again....


lol

From: Shawntae

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Date: 2006-03-06

Chapter: 1

Haha I love this story. It's awesome, I laughed like the entire time. Your awesome!!! Keep it up, lol.

From: Kenji Li Smith

Date: 2005-12-29

Chapter: 1

I fecking loved this story. Ashly no matter what anyone says you are a good writer and do not letanyone tell you otherwise

From: SlashBitch

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Date: 2005-12-22

Chapter: ?

Yeah well.... mine was better!... ok i can't remember mine but for the sake of arguement i'll just say mine was better!..... ok no sorry yours was very entertaining m'lady!

From: Robbourdon/mike

Date: 2005-12-22

Chapter: ?

this was awesome!! i love those ball pits

From: JonLovesChester

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Date: 2005-12-22

Chapter: ?

Reviewing a review of my story.


It was Mike not Brad and Joe didn't put his pants back on, he only re-buttoned his boxers.


Sorry that conffused you.


Ashly : )

From: Keryn

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Date: 2005-12-22

Chapter: ?

Interesting story, I must admit. But I don't get how brad can loose his pants when Joe puts them on for him.

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