omg!! update!!

OMG!!

damnit chels, you keep changing the goddamn story tittle! *rolls eyes* LOL bitchy right? haha thats you! *sticks toungue out* i keep telling you to get up your lazy ass and update at school, but you're not listening!! so i'm gonna tell you here, UPDATE now~~!!

I just review cause I read this. Heeelloooo! *wave like a sick fuck crazy dumb ass *

carly, mei li and jessica?? lol.. you got a lot going on, girl.. haha.. nice chapter! although i think i know where its going..EVENTHOUGH you refused to tell me whats gonna happen..*mumbles* bitch.. hurry and update, biatch!

ughh i feel bad for mike and anna

hey

just wavin'

hurry up and update, bitch! its either that or i start a rumour that you and natasha are having a lesbian relationship! and let the whole school know! oh no wait, the whole world! muahahhaha..ugh, just effing update..

OH My God, that KFC man is so fun. He's fucking amazing. And I fucking love Joe. He's such a genius.

Well, I have read MissB's review. Will you take some real angst there? Uhm, let me see...

Just... need to read more to know...

Even though it's a story set around a plot that is currently done in various version (it's that damn FM song lol) i liked your portrayal. I liked the guys as well because you have them act like a perfect comic relief.

The reaction to the nose breaking was a little superficial in my opinion since, Chester outraged asks Mike twice 'what's wrong with you' even though he already showed in the beginning that he knows about Mike family status and I have to say I doubt that Joe would find it cool and go to a fast food restaurant with a broken nose lol

But that really was a minor point that didn't affect the actual story all that much. After all the heavy violence Mike showed in that moment was vital for the character so I suggest next time you don't really go for broken bones but just plain pain. I liked the truth or dare part a lot since I found it absolutely fitting that Chester would go for dare while the others go for truth, even Mike, though he already knew he didn't want to play at all.

The ending surprised me because i hadn't expected her to be there. It definitely made me curious because I'd like to read more about her and why it is so hard to be away from Mike. Which I, as a MAW, totally get since you always have to stay close to Mike to force angst on him! (Ignore that!).

I think, no, I'm certain that this story might turn out to be a very interesting one and the only thing I can suggest is to take a little more time with the main characters, instead of the others and the circumstances. Not completely of course because as I said I like the comic relief and the descriptions. Especially, and I HAVE to point this one out, the KFC dude. Because not only was Chester's greeting so greatly cockily I also cracked up by the reply. That was hilarious!!

However, I'm thinking that in the main you want to write a more angsty fic, which the beginning clearly showed. It's all about balance and I'm sure you will do great into keeping that balance going.

Can't wait to read more.

Bibi

well, i know you personally, so do i get to know what happens next? as in like, now? PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE!!! i wanna know what anna was doing there! i'll never make fun of you when you open a can of pepsi again! i swear! haha.. joe was so cute in this one... but i bet he'd still be cute with a broken nose lol. but anywayzz, good chapter.. i'm really into this fic..

Haha, you'll find out soon enough.

Poor Mike. *kicks Mike* That's for breaking Joe's nose! Poor Chester's ego. LOL

What is Anna doing there?

Good chapter, I liked. Looking forward to the next one.

first to review!yayy!hahaha.anyway,great storyline so far!CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPS:D