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System by Kenji Li Smith

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From: Shaz

Date: 2007-04-09

Chapter: 8

no matter how many times i read this i never get bored of it... u did good kid (thats right i called u kid i know ure the older of the piper girls but before u complain u know u love me!)

From: bleeding chaos </3

Date: 2006-06-22

Chapter: 7

ooo

damn that was awesome

but...what happened2Robbie and Mikey?!?!??!?!?!?!?

SEQEUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Bitty~

From: Miss Vampire

Date: 2006-05-01

Chapter: 7

OMG I LOVE VAMPIRE STORYS!!

i just watched Queen Of The Damned just last night for the fisrt time That dude is soo fucking HOT!!! omg

well done hun, I'll ttyl ;)

~Ash

From: runaway haylie

Date: 2006-04-30

Chapter: 7

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm freaked by vamps! but i'd bet Joe and Chester are the fucking hottest vamps there ever was and will be! olala LOL! anyway.. tht was really great. another great story finished by a great author.

From: OrangePip

Email:

Date: 2006-04-29

Chapter: 7

i LOVE the vampires!!!!

whiiiii!!!


this fic is wonderful hunni

x

**P**

From: LP_babe

Email: *Yes I'm not logged in cuz I'm to lazyy to..*

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 7

*stares in awe*..what, finished ARGH!!! lol this was great story hun!! good job *thumbs up* hehe lol...Joe and Chester r so hawt together specailly wen ther vampires...argh, vampire guyz look so hawt! *melts* n e way...


Luv yaz

Simmy xox

From: Disturbed Angel (too laz-...oh just fuck it)

Email: Miss_Squarepants15@yahoo.com

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 7

Hey. Adoro este cuento! Means I worship this story! lol! You did a good job. Continue on making your story because I love reading them. Peace out! :)


~Naomi (D.A.)

From: Jackster

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 7

oh dude ive been reading the story but forgetting to revoew my bad my bad

n e ways

loved it was awesome

but man what boutz robbles and mikey

From: Vixenla

Email:

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 7

Cool story! But what about Rob and the others?

From: L~T

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 7

HOLY SHINODA THAT WAS AMAZING!!! LOL



OMG!! Kay, you must write another fic!!!! PLEASY!!!!! LOL


*hugs you tightly*


*is scared about writing the next chapter of my fic* lol

Anywhoo, AWESOMNESS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<3 Take care!! :)

From: LP_babe

Email: Once agen, can't b bothered logging on...

Date: 2006-04-28

Chapter: 6

VAMPIRE+CHESTER= OVALOAD OF HAWTNESS!!!! *stares in shock* now that i wasnt expecting THT:O:O:O please update, i wanna know what happens!! argh all the tension!!! eep!



Luv yaz xox

Simmy

From: runaway haylie

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

omg he's a what? lol.. i'm not gonna be around for the weekend, so i thought i'd check lpfiction before i go and i was pleased to see tht you have updated ehehehe.. with kick ass chapters too.. wooohoo! this story rocks and you know you rock too! :P ~


love,

haylie :P

From: Vixenla

Email:

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

Wow!! Cool!!

From: L~T

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

HOLY BUMNUGGET!!! HE'S A VAMPIRE?????? LOL OMG!!!


Dude!!!!! lmao thats so great!! LOL



Man hurry up with that epilogue!! :)

From: BlackMagick (not logged in)

Email: teenstar321@hotmail.com

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

wow..........................I can't believe it! Chaz is a vampire! Can't wait for the epilogue. VERY GOOD!!

From: mexi-nugget

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

Delete that last review, I wrote that before finishing the story! My bad :P. Great story as always Kenji!

From: mexi-nugget

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

Creative story Kenji, you have have one hell of an imagination! Hurry up with the rest girl! I want see how Chester puts the moves on Joe! ;)

From: OrangePip

Email:

Date: 2006-04-27

Chapter: 6

this rocks :D:D

that is such a twist!

x

**P**

From: LP_babe

Email: can't be bothered to log in, or for any matter is suffering writers block...

Date: 2006-04-26

Chapter: 5

ARRGH!! omg someone stole my word!!!!!


argh "cutee!" n e way... soz -_-' anyway, this story is coming along nicely^_^ at least you can keep your stories up to date like a certain sumbody *stares at self*


...JOE is always so cutee and CHESTER is always so hot!! they make such a cutesexy couple!!


...LOL Mike smoking dope, thats totally dope-_^ hehe...please UPDATE asap, i Like this alot!!


Luv Lotz xox

Simmy

From: BlackMagick (not logged in)

Email: teenstar321@hotmail.com

Date: 2006-04-26

Chapter: 5

Wow...this story is so good! I totally can't wait for the next chapter! What's gonna happen with Joe and Chaz???

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