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From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 12

pfft evil Chester! *growls and hits him on the head* Bad bad bad boy!


*grabs her cookie and runs*

From: Vixenla

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 12

Oh go ahead, hurt him!! lol What about Draven?!?

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 11

omg!! that's great!! i love the draven part!!

i get such great ideas..:p

and don't hurt mikey..:(

i know you won't

try to update soon, again. yes i know, i like my fan fics..:p

-Aeris<3

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 11

omg you destroyed you other fic.. :o

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 11

oh, and i hope chester gets his problem solved.

Bennoda is better than Braz.. XP

-moi <3

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 11

you must update jade!! its getting good!!

i want draven to walk in on them.

-Aeris<3

P.S. remember i love you..:p

From: Forgotten Love

Date: 2006-08-08

Chapter: 10

awww, poor Brad. But I do like Mike and Chester being together. oh well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 10

ooo, wonderful story! But you know I'm chearing for Chester to stay with Mike, cause that's my favorite parring, but this is your story, and I'll be happy with it either way, cause with the way you're wirtting it, I can't help but love this story, no matter what.


-Vampire Princess

From: JonLovesChester

Email:

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 10

This story is getting better in writting style each chapter. Congrats. It took me several stories to get to a place I was happy with in my writting.


Anyway, I have to admit that at the beggining the story was a little choppy in places and I'm not a huge fan of fics revolved around the kids but you're getting better and better and it's winning me over.


Constructive critisism- You're kind of blending two stories into one. Which isn't nesecarily a bad thing, just be careful not to write two seperate stories under one title but make sure you blend the two plot lines (Chester and Draven and then Chester and Brad) together and incorperate them within each other. You also might want to concider adding into your Discription of the story a little something on the Brad Chester drama as well.


But it's moving along wonderfuly and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.


Ashly or Charlie... does anyone really know anymore? : )

From: LIL

Email:

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 10

More more how many reviews you need??

This is just awesome!!!

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 10

OMG i really like it!!

just check your spelling and gramar:p

-Aeris

Update soon!! :o

From: Vixenla

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 9

I wonder if Chester still in love with Brad. I know Brad hurted him but there is still something there and he may not want to let go, not just yet.

From: bennodaluvr

Date: 2006-08-07

Chapter: 9

For the story: Awww poor Brad :( I feel sorry for him now.


For the flashback: How cute!!!!! Braz always made a cute couple. (PS. i'm thinking about writing a Braz, just for you!)


update!!!!

From: Forgotten Love

Date: 2006-08-06

Chapter: 9

yay! reunited!! I liked it a lot, but you can be a bit more descriptive with the different situations, you know facial expressions especially between Brad and Chaz, and Draven and Chaz.

From: chazzy_chaz

Email: chazy_chazlp10@yahoo.com.ar

Date: 2006-08-04

Chapter: 9

it's was soo cutee, I wanna know what happen with brad, I wanna know the end of this story, it's that the end? please continue it!! i liked it so much!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2006-08-04

Chapter: 9

OMG! That was soooo cute!!! *huggles the chapter* Update soon!

From: bleeding chaos </3

Date: 2006-08-03

Chapter: 9

Awww

how sweet

i cant really figure out why you had tears in ur eyes, but then its me talking haha


great chappie

about fuckin time they got it out in the open lol

update soon!!!

-Bitty-

From: bennodaluvr

Date: 2006-08-03

Chapter: 9

OMG!!!!! You did it!!! *glomps you 50 millions times* yay!!!!


Now you realllllly have to update!!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2006-08-03

Chapter: 8

Glad to see them together again. What's up with Brad?

From: Barush

Date: 2006-08-03

Chapter: 7

that was sooo sweet...:))


but it can't be the end, what about Brad? and... and... I dunno, but I just want mooore... please!!:)

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