Reviews
Original Sin by a.rob
From: nodabear89
Email: kaji5785@yahoo.com
Date: 2006-07-16
Chapter: 1
Those naughty, naughty boys!! that was great!
From: Andrea
Email:
Date: 2006-07-16
Chapter: 1
Very hot!
From: Soleil_Fairy
Date: 2006-07-14
Chapter: 1
I love stories like this! They're so wrong, but so right at the same time, you know? Kinky and forbidden makes for a great passionate scene. Yum!! Update soon!
From: Silencer
Date: 2006-07-14
Chapter: 1
Wow... That was so fucking HOT!! Very well written too. I liked how you created the atmosphere of darkness and sin in a holy place.
THIS FIC FUCKING TURNED ME ON! UPDATE SOON!!
Silencer.
From: Susan
Email:
Date: 2006-07-14
Chapter: 1
Wow. That was effin'(lmao) hot! Damn.
From: chaziscrazy
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Date: 2006-07-14
Chapter: 1
Woo! that was awesome. I have never thought about something like that in a setting like that lol.
From: BlackMagick (not logged in)
Email: teenstar321@hotmail.com
Date: 2006-07-13
Chapter: 1
*stares wide-eyed* in a church?!? wow, if me and my boy/girlfriend (I'm bisexual) ever did that in my old church, Dora Christian, I would be scared shitless...not of being caught but fucking around in that awful place!! *goofy grin*
it was fucking hot nonetheless, so please update very very soon!!!!!!!!
Jen
From: DeMoNiC_aNGeL
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
That was very hot. Very hot indeed. And you intend on adding more chapters? That is nice because I would like to read more.
From: SMW
Email:
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
"Face it Mike – that definitely wasn’t the smartest thing you could have done. Besides, how else am I going to know what turns you on? Learn how to fucking orgasm, would you? It’s starting to bother me." - That line made my day...I laughed so hard when I read it.
That was so fucking hot and naughty! I loved it and I hate that you cut it off so short *gives you a sad puppy face* update soon!
From: Disturbed Angel
Email: Miss_Squarepants15@yahoo.com
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
That. was. so fucking. hott. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
~Naomi Angel
From: ♥†saosinabunn†♥
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
oooo neat-o! i like it but that's so naughty!! i like it...likey like like. *gives u a cookie* glad to hear you're intending to add a chapter!
-saosin♥♥♥
From: hit_n_run_me
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
This fic is actually my heaven. I loved Mike's opening line; you can just imagine him saying that. I'm looking forward to the next part.
From: bleeding chaos </3
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
HOLY FUCK!!!
that was so FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!??!
HOW?!??!?!?!?!?!???!?!
in the "famous" words of back~stabber-grrrr on you!!!!
update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Bitty-
From: SCL
Date: 2006-07-12
Chapter: 1
it was fucking HOT, wow... okay, so I liked Mike's nervousness, and I liked Chester's persistance. But HEY! It rocked.. and yes, reviews are a beautiful thing, they make us all giddy.
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From: Juicy
Date: 2006-07-17
Chapter: 1
Wow! That was so damn hot. I adore the way you write and the idea of the story is purely delicious!
I'm waiting for another chapter. *hugs*