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Original Sin by a.rob

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From: Juicy

Date: 2006-07-17

Chapter: 1

Wow! That was so damn hot. I adore the way you write and the idea of the story is purely delicious!

I'm waiting for another chapter. *hugs*

From: nodabear89

Email: kaji5785@yahoo.com

Date: 2006-07-16

Chapter: 1

Those naughty, naughty boys!! that was great!

From: Andrea

Email:

Date: 2006-07-16

Chapter: 1

Very hot!

From: Soleil_Fairy

Date: 2006-07-14

Chapter: 1

I love stories like this! They're so wrong, but so right at the same time, you know? Kinky and forbidden makes for a great passionate scene. Yum!! Update soon!

From: Silencer

Date: 2006-07-14

Chapter: 1

Wow... That was so fucking HOT!! Very well written too. I liked how you created the atmosphere of darkness and sin in a holy place.


THIS FIC FUCKING TURNED ME ON! UPDATE SOON!!



Silencer.

From: Susan

Email:

Date: 2006-07-14

Chapter: 1

Wow. That was effin'(lmao) hot! Damn.

From: chaziscrazy

Email:

Date: 2006-07-14

Chapter: 1

Woo! that was awesome. I have never thought about something like that in a setting like that lol.

From: Chiquita

Date: 2006-07-13

Chapter: 1

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE PLEASE AND SOON!

From: BlackMagick (not logged in)

Email: teenstar321@hotmail.com

Date: 2006-07-13

Chapter: 1

*stares wide-eyed* in a church?!? wow, if me and my boy/girlfriend (I'm bisexual) ever did that in my old church, Dora Christian, I would be scared shitless...not of being caught but fucking around in that awful place!! *goofy grin*


it was fucking hot nonetheless, so please update very very soon!!!!!!!!


Jen

From: DeMoNiC_aNGeL

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

That was very hot. Very hot indeed. And you intend on adding more chapters? That is nice because I would like to read more.

From: Aeris

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

wow. dirty Bennoda. just the way i like it! :D

From: SMW

Email:

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

"Face it Mike – that definitely wasn’t the smartest thing you could have done. Besides, how else am I going to know what turns you on? Learn how to fucking orgasm, would you? It’s starting to bother me." - That line made my day...I laughed so hard when I read it.


That was so fucking hot and naughty! I loved it and I hate that you cut it off so short *gives you a sad puppy face* update soon!

From: Disturbed Angel

Email: Miss_Squarepants15@yahoo.com

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

That. was. so fucking. hott. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.


~Naomi Angel

From: ♥†saosinabunn†♥

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

oooo neat-o! i like it but that's so naughty!! i like it...likey like like. *gives u a cookie* glad to hear you're intending to add a chapter!


-saosin♥♥♥

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

good story so far, update soon!

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

This fic is actually my heaven. I loved Mike's opening line; you can just imagine him saying that. I'm looking forward to the next part.

From: bleeding chaos </3

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

HOLY FUCK!!!

that was so FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!??!

HOW?!??!?!?!?!?!???!?!

in the "famous" words of back~stabber-grrrr on you!!!!

update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Bitty-

From: caitt

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

Oh, i loved it.

:]

From: SCL

Date: 2006-07-12

Chapter: 1

it was fucking HOT, wow... okay, so I liked Mike's nervousness, and I liked Chester's persistance. But HEY! It rocked.. and yes, reviews are a beautiful thing, they make us all giddy.

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