Only one word can really sum this up. Beautiful.

*realizes that my mouth is dangling open wide enoguh to catch flies*

*snaps mouth closed and is humiliated*

Holy sheezus. Your way of describing things is just...*fights the urge to say 'mind-boggling' yet again* incredible. Yay at my usage of a different word for once! XD

But dangit. This was deep, amazingly written, beautiful...I loved it.

<3

That was really lovely, the description was beautiful but you really got me at the end; so sad.

Man, that was amazing. I could actually FEEL Mike's pain. Good job.

On an unrelated note, writer's block really is a bitch. I feel your pain.

nice beginning to the story. honestly i have to tell you that the paragraphs seemed to be dragging. i think you had too much poetry or something going on that made me feel like i had to skip over a few sentences. other than that, it's good so far :)

Awww poor Mikey :(

yeah yeah, sure sure, taunt me with amazing skill. I see how it is! *sniffles*

Another sad standalone. I kinda felt bad, you know, getting what you want, but at the same time, not really [i]having[/i] it in your grasp.

Suckage.

Like you . and your damned amazing writing.

I miss you... write some more will ya? :D

I'm the first to review and I have to say that was just amazing. It was so well written and got right to the point. The bit about Chester being married was a bit of a bummer but that was a fab story. I am so glad you've got over your writing block.