A friend of mine just read this, and I think you nearly offed her :]

It was...different from what you'd of expected from the start. <3

and honestly, Chusnix is neglected so, it makes me happy that you wrote this. Not to mention that it's also very good.

Love..love..love this story! What a fantastic idea and so fucking hot too! I especially enjoyed the dialogue between chester and phi, the way they kept slipping out of character, showing their affection for one another. Sneaky, hot sex with the wife so close by...can't get any better than that!!!<3 I want the toy too btw..lol

Wonderfully written. I liked how you approached the Stalker theme, too. It made me giggle ^^

<3

strange - when i read this on the LJ it HAD posted it all before!? livejournal confuses me at times. silly thing!

anyway, copy and paste, mkay?

Chusnix?

*faints*

Okay, I really enjoyed this - the way it started all creepy and me thinking WTF is going on, why is there some dude following Chester and his family - to the sudden lightness that this was Phoenix! GAH. Holy hotness when he grabbed Chester into the bushes..

I liked their little game, the way Phoenix kept slipping out of ‘character’ and I like that this was a really unique idea, not at all what I thought I was reading when it started out. Using the theme in a light hearted manner was brilliant (:

And mm, chusnix, hints of dirty!christian!david!

(:

~~wOW. hot story!! This phiphi[i mean .. phoenix]so interesting ..and sexy chaz !!XD

oh holy shit dammit! it's just so fucking hot!!

never seen such a sweet kidnapper Phi before and his wonderful game with Chester, oh yes, Chaz here is sexy and erotic too.

the toy gun made my day~~

yeah!!love the story^^

oh holy shit dammit! it's just so fucking hot!!

never seen such a sweet kidnapper Phi before and his wonderful game with Chester, oh yes, Chaz here is sexy and erotic too.

the toy gun made my day~~

yeah!!love the story^^

oh holy shit dammit! it's just so fucking hot!!

never seen such a sweet kidnapper Phi before and his wonderful game with Chester, oh yes, Chaz here is sexy and erotic too.

the toy gun made my day~~

yeah!!love the story^^

It's so funny.*^ ^roll on the floor* They are both cute. Btw, I want that toy.

This is so HOT! I do love that gun and I love the sweet Phi and this Chaz who loving to be hurt.They all beautiful.

Oh hell yes! I fucking love this story!:D

ew I don't think I want that gun *giggle!* anyways, that was really good! I did enjoy reading it very much!

Copy and paste, yes?

I really liked this. It's simply not what you expect in a stalker fic - for it to actually be consensual and not part of a revenge tactic or just the act of a scorned lover. I really liked that about this story. It surprised me and caught me off guard in that respect.

The beginning of this was absolutely lovely. :) I loved that you didn't reveal his identity until later. It played all sorts of tricks with my imagination. But...Phoenix/Chester FTW! Seriously. It was hot. And funny. The 'punk' lines, especially...

“Punk is…. Just really lame.”

“Chester.” Phoenix whined.

“Ok ok, ohh don’t hurt me.”

Phoenix whining is just a really adorable image to me, for some reason. I'm glad you gave him lots of attention in this. :) And gun!sex rules.

Great job with this! I really enjoyed it. =D

*swoons* Got my knees weak! Loved it!!

That was so hot. Never thought I would be into Chaz-nix--but this story proved me wrong.

Toy gun= I loll'd at that part, I thought it was cuteee. As for Chester/Phi having boy seckors= Hott<33

I enjoyed this standalone!

Oh holy shit that was hawt! And Phi is so sweet, being concerned whether Chazzy was in pain or not. MORE!!

-danni

I really liked this, an interesting setting and theme. I lol'd at the toy gun, last time i read a fic where someone was fucked by one, it wasn't a toy and went off, it was gross.

This was fun and hot and now I'm really into gun!sex again.