Oh, man, I just died. That was one fucking awesome story.

"Then again, it might’ve been heartburn."

Chester's apathy - like it's already been said, you managed to portray a killer and psychopath SO well. It was chilling, and upsetting, and shocking.

And it made me so freaking happy. =D

I loved this. It's pure brilliance. You did a wonderful job!

that was one crazy story. i loved it. there were a few things that confused me but overall, this story was amazing. i'm glad it came out of the blue. it was just perfectly written. i don't get the beginning though...

chester could be killed in this fic

he deserves to die, because he kill another guys

Oh my dear, Lee. This is... I can't think straight. This will probably be a nice long ramble, lol.

For a while, you wrote so I was sympathetic for Chester and it shows he still has some conscience as he walked through the corridor. Just something as simple as the colour of the doors added more to it for me.

The part wit his mother made is sound like whatever he did to put him in the psychiatric ward wasn't too big of a deal, like he was some pampered celebrity who took too many drugs to feel anything anymore.

The bit in italics made me further sympathize for him, like he shouldn't be in there. You surely set up an unreliable character.

The letter from Mike was an eye opener, indeed. I was rooting for his visit, maybe hoping that some connection would be made between the two of them to make Chester realize what a mistake he made. I was just let down by the conversation. When Chester said "And I, you." it just really chilled me, I don't know. The way he shrugged off everything around him and what was done, but still showing he had some sort of special connection with Mike from the letter [either that or it was an obsessive relationship of some sort].

The ending left me with an emptiness and I started tearing up. The way Chester, again, downplayed his emotions [or lack thereof] was really creepy to me.

I love that with such simple, yet poetic, descriptions and interactions you pulled out so much emotion and reaction. This serves as a reminder of why I'm a fangirl for your writing in the first place. <3

No reviews yet? Seriously? :O

Anyways, THAT, my friend, was one of the best stories of yours that I've ever read. It hit me as being less wordy and descriptive than your stories usually are, but that just seemed to add more to the story-the whole "less is more" thing. The descriptions of the patients, of the hospitals and everything else, was haunting. Haunting in a good way though, if you know what I mean.

Before I go on a long, wordy, most likely senseless review consisting of a bunch of sentences that all end in "you know what I mean?" I will just say this:

You're a brilliant writer, like I've said a million times before, and stories like this totally prove it. :D