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My Immortal by .:=Miss-Gah-gah=:.
From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut
Date: 2010-06-08
Chapter: 6
omg the sex was HAWT XD i really loved this! so awesome! Otis is lucky toi have dads like that ;P
From: lplover22
Date: 2010-02-08
Chapter: 5
Very Hot! That's how vampires should be! I would love a sequel!
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2010-02-08
Chapter: 5
I'd love to see a second part! :D I really liked this story.
From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut
Date: 2010-02-08
Chapter: 5
Dom chaz? *pout* oh well it was still incredibly sexy hun ;)
Oh you have to put an epi. Please!!!
From: *Princess*Of*Darkness*
Date: 2010-01-11
Chapter: 4
One more chapter?!! Thats it?!!!
I really liked this but i think u should make the chapter a 'little' bit longer. Anyway love the story and please update soon >_<
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2010-01-10
Chapter: 4
i like this chapter, love that chaz's vulnerable part revealed in front of Mike, and his sincerity, looks chaz was start to trust mike, thats good, and the kiss, bennoda love growing~ XDD
waiting for the next chapter~ good work! :D
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2010-01-09
Chapter: 3
ouchy, Anna died a painful death lmao. Nice chapter, update soon?
From: lplover22
Date: 2010-01-09
Chapter: 3
lol its good. Bennoda is always hot. ;) As much as I don't like Anna I'm sad that she died, but I'm so happy that Otis lived! Only one chapter and an epi left seems to short. I can't wait to see how you make it work!
From: J.Sousa
Date: 2009-12-31
Chapter: 2
I'm loving where this is going so far! I must admit, Vampire Chester, with all that power in his hands....it's pretty yumi! *giggle*
I felt really bad when Chester kicked Mike's ass, but I'm guessing this is gonna end up in a Vampiresque love thing xD
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next, hope you update, this story promises a lot!!! ^^,
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-12-31
Chapter: 2
Vampire Mike and Chester = Effing HOT!!! Poor Mikey doesn't know what's going on. I like how this is going. Update soon!
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2009-12-30
Chapter: 2
It's good to see that Chester helped Mike :3 I really like this story.
From: *Princess*Of*Darkness*
Date: 2009-12-24
Chapter: 2
Hmmm cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Update soon!! I'll be waiting
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-12-23
Chapter: 2
ohhhhh >< thats hurt, but but~~ :D is this the start of love? i hope that~ lol
wanna read more~! good work~
and X'Mas~~!
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-12-23
Chapter: 2
Um well, that's not what I expected. Thought Mikey was going to change Chester. That last part was graphic. Good chapter though. Can't wait to see what's next!
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From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2010-06-08
Chapter: 6
aww that was sweet :) I did enjoy this story a lot, wonderful job