Oh wow . . . I really can't believe I didn't read this sooner. Wow... this story blew my mind, honestly. The intro was so funny! I busted out laughing when you mentioned Robert Pattinson and Taylor whatshisface lol!

I just gotta say, I LOVED LOVED LOVED your word usage . . . the marshmallow hugs and honey and ::faints:: just beautiful imagery.

The song was PERFECT for the tear jerker scene. I listened to it while reading the ending and I gotta say . . . I cried. I really did. I absolutely love how you ended the story without actually detailing the sex scene. It really did make the story that much more epic and perfect. It focused on the actual love that formed between the two boys rather than the hot sex they had ;D

Perfection. Honestly, fantastic story. I loved it so so much. And the song, beautiful.

::wipes away remaining tears:: Just . . . I can't say it enough!! Perfect, perfect. Please write another M/C story like this one! So brilliant and so well written. I might just cry again!!

<3 Shanny

What's up? I forgot to tell you that the whole celebrities thing in the chapter was awesome. Tyler is waaaaaaaaaay hotter than Robert, by the way.

All-American Rejects? They're like the third coolest band ever (The first is Linkin Park, of course!!, the second is Hollywood Undead.) I would happily be one of their groupies, any time of the day ;D ;D

You're so right, he sounds like an angel.

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Sorry, I was daydreaming. *sigh*

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I would have told you about my dreams, but they're X-Rated ;D ;D ;D ;D

Would you believe me if I told you that I was listening to them while I was reading the chapter (Can't Take It, It Ends Tonight, The Winds Blows, Damn Girl… these are their coolest songs) and I swear to God that I listened to 'Breathe Me' an hour before I read the story. That was creepy.

I was also trashing Justin Bibber on the phone, so I thought you'll trash him, too. So it will become even creeper ;);):) (I hate that dude)

Please, write a sequel!! You can't just ended it like that!! It was too good to end that fast. I seriously loved it!

Oh, My God!! This is like the best story, ever!! Hilarious, don't seem to cover it. It's also has the sweetest end. I kinda except Slash in the end (Because you described Chester as 'Sex on feet') but the end was waaaay better than Slash (I'm not a very big fan of Slash) the shattered glass, and Mike's protective attitude made me smile widely, and go; 'awww' loudly, like a stupid person.

I want to break my every glass in my house, maybe he'll appear and carry me. *sigh*

Brain-dead smile. That was original!

But Mikey has monkey-face? *shake my head in disapproval* oh, well. Whatever. I actually laughed at it.

I'm kind of sad it's a standalone. You should totally change your mind about that, and write more chapters to it. Or make a Sequel!!!

Oh, you're iPod was stolen? That sucks. I hope you it turns out that you misplaced it. That happened to me more times than I can recall ;) ;)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHWWWWWWWWWWWW

we see chester the same way *-*

*dies* THIS IS SHOOO CUUUUUTEEEE he's such an adorable little thing.. this is beautiful! *rates*

MUhahaha~ XDD this made my day!

chaz just too CUTE in this one, awwwwww i totally LOVE how you depicted chazs appearance and body, *nosebleed* i totally agree about those legs >< those feminine, extreme sexy legs XD and mikey u are a lucky hot guy XDD he is a active and really gorgeous guy at there, thats why chaz addicted to him too LOL this perfect~ and i like the 'monkey face' name LOL can imagine chaz was called mike like this, hahaha thats a priceless image LOL

and the ending, ohhhh im fangirling now XD~

AMAZING job! :D *add fav*

Fwaaa~!

This is waay too cute for words. I started out laughing, and finished "aww" ing. :3

Here take these: -throws hugs-

Definitely one of the stories i luff to read to most: ones about emotion, and not entirely about action. -applause-

So, I read this a few days ago, when you first posted it - yet, I didn't find the time to review and I'm mad that I didn't! First of all, because the story was good and second, I'm sick of the views not adding up to the reviews! You have close to 90 views, yet only 4 FOUR! people have reviewed. I know I can rant here, but instead, I will compliment your work.

I liked the way this started out, in Chester's POV. I was really curious as to how you were going to make it a standalone, because in my opinion, it seemed like this definitely could have been multi-chaptered. However, in the end, I liked it as a stand-alone. (We may not have gotten to read their wonderful kiss if it hadn't been!) And oh yes, the kiss. The fantastic kiss! Definitely, the best part of the story. It was incredibly sweet and tender and portrayed it perfectly. As well as beginning and ending the story with Chester and why he ran with his eyes closed. I loved it, it was full of hope. Awesome job!

OMG, what an ADORABLE standalone ! WTF, only 4 reviews ?! This piece of art deserved waay more appreciation, damn it !

Overall, I wouldnt change anything, its was completly perfect. Started with an slight of comedy and perversion by Mike, but ended in the most romantic way possible, gotta love your writing and sense of sarcasm, as well :)

Although, I got to say, I laughed my ass of with the song 'Single Ladies' 8D, aaaw, Chus singing it, how cuuute ! ^^;

Love it, love it, love it, in conclusion ! <3

<3 wow that was amazing I loved it! :D

OMFG!!!!!

That was the most PERFECT ending <3

I loved the entire style of it...VERY well done :)

I have to say I was expecting some hot Bennoda slash...yet I wasn't even dissapointed when there wasn't :3

Really great job!

I can't get over the ending...it's amazing :)

*hugs you*

loved it ^_^

awh I loved it, the music fitted perfectly, thank you!