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How to Soothe a Broken Heart by PaperWulf

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From: Aliina

Date: 2012-11-25

Chapter: 8

Its been a while since any of your stories have been updated, this may be inappropriate seeing as how this isn't the story I'm going to beg you to update, but I've run out of options ... and I'm desparate !!! Please, please, please ... PLEASE update wilting rose.

From: mary_mala_mi

Date: 2011-12-15

Chapter: 8

I started reading Your story yesterday and I think it's amazing:) I really like this:) Will You, please wirte another chapters? 'cause I can't wait to know will happen!?

From: Anastacia

Date: 2011-11-30

Chapter: 8

This is my very first review for this story,and i have to say,Shanny,im seriously a fan of your stories...The way you write AMAZE me(And im not having a lot of fav author's,but you are TOTALLY one of my fav's!) What should i say about this story?Its killing me to see Chester like...this.But there's an angel,Mike,who's,in my opinion saved his life.Thats so dramatic,yet beautiful.Alright,lets talk about this chapter.I LOVED Becky's character,she seems so nice and friendly (Just like the Becky we all love<3) I love that she gave C a homework xDDD Oh,and i was so sad when Chester said,that he miss his son,thats totally heartbreaking that he's not able to talk with his little one,hug him,and tell him,how much he loves him *sniff* Alright,may i say that the whole Hershey's kisses thingy made me laugh?Especially when Mike was like:I give you a kiss''Oh my,that was cute:))Update soon,please.Don't forget about this story coz its WAY too awesome

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-11-29

Chapter: 8

Omg ponies this was so beautiful! <3 I'm so glad that you updated this!!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-11-29

Chapter: 8

HAPPY SEE YOU UPDATE THIS! AAWWWW! :D


cherry filled Hershey Kisses!!! sound so yummy! o-o

'“Well, I guess all you have to do is feed me chocolate.”' this sound lovely and sexy! XD


ok, then, i dont like anna here, tho i could understand her, in her position, thats very awkard at there...hummm


and the 'giving kiss'& 'returning kiss' part just...awww...think today i will keep in this melted mode and cant back...why they are soooo cute there, and i love their relationship at there, no matter friendship or romantic, thats both sooooo warm and sweet there...aw :') and im happy see that chaz get kinda better now, at last, i feel things step to the active way...XP


AMAZING chap! LOVE you soooo much! :D

From: Jacq

Date: 2011-11-28

Chapter: 8

I'm so happy you updated this! I actually re read the whole thing lol.


I love this story so much. I'm as much of a sucker for the angst as i am for the romance. My heart aches so much for Chester. I understand his pain. I know what it feels like to believe that you're worthless. But i also know that if Mike sticks by his side, Ches will eventually begin to realize that he is loved and needed.


::sigh:: Mike confuses me though. I know he wants to help Chester, but i almost feel as if he is leading him on by all of the touchy feely stuff. I really want to know his reason for doing what they did that night. Its difficult to completely understand his intentions. I want to know more of what Mike is thinking.


I love Becky's character in this! Shes so awesome! If the counseler i had worked the way she does i might have snapped out of my funk a lot quicker lol. Jaws rules! And of course Drama Llama is awesome too!


I hope you update this soon. I didn't realize how much i missed it until today!


Jacquie <333333333333333333

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2011-11-28

Chapter: 8

So sweeeeeet! the smile hasn't disappeared during the reading of this chapter. Kissing chocolate! What a wonderful thing! you did a good job! ohhhh Mike! he did it intentionally, didnt he? Giving u a kiss!;)

Chester was so cute when he said he was returning the kiss. Omg I even thought they were flirting!

From: Grey Daze

Date: 2011-11-28

Chapter: 8

Awwness :D that chap was so cute! And yay for chocolate, tis the best invention ever!

Poor Chazzy, he doesn't realize just how much Mikey cares. :(

I wonder who he'll talk to next *is in suspense*

Please update soon, I LOVE this story to pieces! :D it's so sad, yet cute at the same time :)

From: kekerica1

Date: 2011-08-08

Chapter: 7

I really enjoy this! And I totally understand how Chester is feeling in this story. Really sad.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-07-22

Chapter: 7

Aw man poor Chaz! I really liked this chapter :3 some parts made me smile but there were a lot of sad parts too :(

From: Figgy

Date: 2011-07-22

Chapter: 7

Is this an update I see? Why, yes it is.


I loved this chapter, seriously. I just... I... it... *is at a loss for words*... it was beautiful.


Jeez, I sound so lame. Apologies.


Update soon! I can't wait to see how this turns out!

From: Jacq

Date: 2011-07-21

Chapter: 7

You are my fave writer. I love everything about this story. I relate so well with it. Please update soon! Wonerful fic!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-07-21

Chapter: 7

i just hope that, hope that chaz will find himself and his happy again, with mike. mikes love for him at there is so strong and warm, aww >< thats will help right? tho now chaz still so lost and despair on himself. i really really hope he will get better ><


and...the kiss part is so hot! awwww! >< they need this, and well~~ XD when chaz said stop but still want, thats make it even more hot LOL


and i wonder what if anna find this...she is dont like chaz by now...><


amazing! i LOVE this story soooooo much!!! always waiting for more! and love you :)

From: ~awkward-affection

Date: 2011-07-20

Chapter: 7

So...first lust-ness monster and now Chesternip? Wicked. Btw I loved the part at rehab, cause, I'm like that.


Update soon! <3

From: PilotFlyLykPapr

Date: 2011-07-20

Chapter: 7

*sniffle* Chazzy needs to get betteeeerrr lol I think that Mike is hiding that he's in love with Chester ;) that's why he keeps pulling moves on him and hinting around lol Chester reminds me of myself cuz if I was into drugs (thank the Lord that I'm not) then I'd probably rant to all those people too lol I'd be like "You bunch of lazy asses, get up and do something about it!" lol I loooooved this chapter! Best birthday I've had so far ^.^

From: Maiferu

Date: 2011-07-05

Chapter: 6

Oh, I always love this story so much. You know that. And I'm so happy that you're managing to update it as regularly as possible. Thank you! *bows*

AAARRRRGGGHHH, too much conflict. I can sense it. Something's gonna happen. Right? Oh well, I hope I'm mistaking, but...something will have to happen. I mean, unfortunately, Anna exists -.- I'm really curious to know what will Mike do. I can't imagine anything just right now, honestly. You'll take me by surprise, whatever you'll do. And I can't wait for you to do that :D I'm waiting for an update sweetie!! And I MISS YOU SO FUCKING MUCH!!!!!!

From: Figgy

Date: 2011-07-02

Chapter: 6

Ohhhh my god. You know this already, but I LOVE this story, so much. I think it really clicks with me because I can relate to how Chester is feeling, his total lack of confidence in himself, and a few of the, er... other things he's done to himself. It's like me, male, with an extra 20 years, and it really strikes a chord with me.


Anyway, I really loved this chap. He's going to live with Mike, how sweet! It kinds stinks that Anna isn't really supportive of the idea, though... one would like to think she'd be all for it.


It's really cute how Mike is being all protective over Chester, making sure he doesn't do anything else to himself. I think everybody needs somebody like that in their life, and I'm really happy for Chester that he has Mike :) naturally, they're amazingly cute together, but that's just a given xD


Lovelovelove this. Keep up the great work!!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-07-02

Chapter: 6

SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY SEE YOU UPDATE THIS STORY! i just so in love with it!! you know, angst!chaz always the best XD


and this chap. aw EPIC!i love that how you wrote chazs mood swings there, a while he wanna live, a while he think he was not worth to live, a while he just talk like a bitch but he is really depression and fragile there, yus thought maybe other guys cant handle this, just mike can, cuz Chester loves mike even more than he can see...>3<


i just love that chaz hear what anna and mike talk, aw XD tho that make him think something negative, but that make them said things direct and mike told chaz how important he is to him in the bedroom after, i just so love that! *with mike even whack chazs head to make chaz to be a obedient boy. ><*

and the 'Heh, he touched my underwear.' teehee! thats so adorable! XD


and the bathroom scene, aw poor chaz, got so much pain so much hurt...>< but i love that mike into the bathroom to ask him, thats sweet, and he wanna help to wash, this gave me so great image there XD sorry, but i really love this. and yus, talk to him not your lonely self, it will make things better...:3


LOVE, the most intricate word in this world. >< hope chaz will know what is that mean.


AMAZING CHAP! wanna read more so much! all things from you are great! just LOVE! :DDD

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-07-02

Chapter: 6

Omg I loved this chapter, I'm glad Chester is living with Mike for now but I wish Anna wasn't so..evil? About the whole situation :(.

From: ~awkward-affection

Date: 2011-07-01

Chapter: 6

lust ness monster.


lol.


poor chester, i hope he gets better <3 and the withdrawal, that sounds scary >8D

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