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When They Come For Me by BourdonGirl

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From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2011-03-22

Chapter: 10

Awh wasn't that cute! I loved the whole thing you said about the f-word. I feel the exact same way. I can't stand it when someone says it. It's so mean and degrading. Anyways, that chapter was, in my mind, the best so far:) Keep up the good work, and update fast!

From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2011-03-03

Chapter: 9

If I had potato wedge while I was reading this, I'd totally be chewing on it nervously like Chester! Hehe It was funny in the beginning, then serious at the end. I love how this story keeps you guessing! Update! Update! Update!

From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2011-03-02

Chapter: 8

Aww! That beginning was way to cute! Rob wrapped up in Brad's arms! Aww! Everything else was really funny! The whole thing with Christina Aguilara and Pink. You shoulda put Brad in the argument. I'm sure he would pick Britney Spears if not Robbie! Lol it took a long time for you to update. Better not be that long next time. Can't wait!

From: jessiejoe_chester!

Date: 2011-02-03

Chapter: 7

review review review lol

U QUOTED ME I FEELZ SO SPEESHULZ!!!

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:D

From: jessiejoe_chester!

Date: 2011-02-03

Chapter: 7

pft i wanna bird with an afro.

lol

colon capital D

:D

From: Figgy

Date: 2011-01-19

Chapter: 7

Kyaaah! Love confessions; my favorite part <3

From: Figgy

Date: 2011-01-09

Chapter: 6

I have a question, is this based off the Maximum Ride book series? Someone having wings, School=University, on the run, etc. Forgive me if I'm wrong :P

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-12-10

Chapter: 4

cute chap =) Mike was so scared! But still awe stricken at Brad's wings. ^.^ I would love to have wings. I actually had a dream (no lie) last night that i had these gorgeous black wings. It was so epic lol

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-12-09

Chapter: 3

HAHAHAHA This chapter was so hilarious!!!! When Mike saw that "bird" in the sky and said "does that bird have an afro" I nearly died.


Dumb Blonde Mode-activated.


HAHAHAHA I totally do this when I am trying to deny something. Am I a what? A bird? Is your pot laced with something? How can I be a bird? -- that is what I would have done haha.


Alas, I like that Brad came clean and told how he came to be a bird man! I hope that doesn't put them in danger!!

From: BeHappy13

Date: 2010-12-08

Chapter: 3

Mike was mean to rob!!!

From: Figgy

Date: 2010-12-08

Chapter: 2

Ok, favorite line: "Braddy, you flew into a tree." xD This is such a cute and well-written story, with a great idea. Can't wait to read more!!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-12-07

Chapter: 2

lol it was so funny when Brad was trying to learn how to fly! DOH! a tree >.< I'd shriek too if I was clinging on to some newbies back while they learned how to fly with me on them XD I hate heights!

From: BeHappy13

Date: 2010-12-07

Chapter: 2

Lol good start! I love rob!!!!!!!!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-12-07

Chapter: ?

I am a total fan of A/U, so I say keep going :) Though I'm a Bennoda fan, I write other pairings and have been open to reading them as well. I myself have written a R/B ;) Brad's wings are beautiful! Always seen black or white, so brown is such a beautiful change!


<3 Shanny

From: SlicePaperWrists44

Date: 2010-12-07

Chapter: ?

I like where this is going so far! I'd definitely like to see more. Plus, Brad/Rob is my favorite and I never really see too much of it anymore, so this is a very nice change from all the Bennoda floating around here.

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