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Obsession by hybridgurl

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From: CryCry

Date: 2014-05-04

Chapter: 3

Awesome plotline...

From: lplover22

Date: 2009-08-19

Chapter: 3

Late I know, but I just read this now.


Wow I'm in awe. That was amazing!!! The vibe was creepy but sensual at the same time. Great job!!!!

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-04-18

Chapter: 3

Oh my god I love this story

Also sorry about this but I could't help it after readint this. It's really terrible but...http://chesters-linkin-lady.deviantart.com/art/obsession-119723303

From: Raitseka

Date: 2007-10-08

Chapter: 3

omg, is there a sequel? can u make one if not? wow, i worship you

From: ~PsyhcoLPFan~

Date: 2005-08-28

Chapter: 3

o0o that was scary yet very exotic in a twisted sort of way haha...that was really good though, very realistic, especially with his illness and such...

From: silencio

Date: 2005-05-20

Chapter: 3

Omg! That was...WOW!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2004-06-28

Chapter: 3

mmm, that was strange, but it was also very good, I loved it!

From: kornkob

Email: kornkaykob@aol.com

Date: 2004-05-19

Chapter: 3

Gosh that was amazing! thrilling, evil, dark and so sexy all in one. Truely a great fic. Thanks for making my day!

From: Caz

Email: Burakowa@interia.pl

Date: 2004-04-09

Chapter: 3

Sexy...Dark..Kinky...Psychotic Mike... HOLY SHITAKI!!!! That was so feaking brilliant!! God.. Poor Chaz and sooo unaware Mike...

*falls over*

*claps her hands* BRAVOOOO!

From: Olivia

Email: Highvoltage7790@aol.com

Date: 2004-04-06

Chapter: 3

Another nasty mike fan here...^^ Great story though,you really have a way with words.

From: Ashley

Email: crazyalpc@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-03-20

Chapter: 3

*gapes in shock*

*falls off chair*

*climbs back up slowly*

*whimpers looking at her LP poster*

Mike scary....

Love Mike...

Good work....

From: noodlegirl

Email:

Date: 2004-03-19

Chapter: 3

oh. my. fucking. sweet phoenix.


THAT WAS FUCKING BRILLANT. I'm literally in fucking awe. And this time I know it's not the lack of sleep and Nyquil talking...THAT was fucking amazing. Shit, I really thought it was real too...Sigh...Maybe it was...UGH! Gotta love physco Mike. Nothing hotter than physco Mike fucking poor innoncent Chaz...Hehehe. You own my ass and I am SO adding this to my favorites.


\m/ rock the fuck on

From: the Sinner

Date: 2004-03-16

Chapter: 3

*mouth hangs open*



*mouth is still hanging open*


*mouth is unable to close*


Holy fucking shit, that was amazing. AWESOME job!!!!!!!

From: SaFFroN

Date: 2004-03-12

Chapter: 3

That was perfect. =) I love the last two lines... We need more stories like this one. Good job!

From: GCcatastrophy

Email:

Date: 2004-03-11

Chapter: 3

Wow. That was freaking awesome. Very, very, VERY nice job! It was so original and just... great. More stories soon!

-court

From: shinobi

Email: superstitious_minds_collide@yahoo.co.uk

Date: 2004-03-11

Chapter: 3

Wow. I loved that! Had me completely absorbed from start to end, your use of words and style of writing fucking rocked!!


The plot was so orginal - and honestly one of the best au fics I've read in a while. Such a good thing to read, like a breath of fresh air on this site that is currently over run with some not so good fics!


Ahhh, Mike. I absoloutly loved him! A manic, lonely, socially troubled, sadistic being! You wrote from his pov so well - witty, twisted and believing that what he is doing was not abnormal whatsoever!!


I loved the way his obsession with Chester started. From seeing him once to believing he was loved by him and that he was going to be with him and draven forever - this pretty pipe dream that he was absorbed in and wanted to make Dr. Rachael believe in - just because he was so lonely and had no one to tell.


I also loved her character too. She provided a kind of humurous start to each chapter - trying her best to make Mike see he was ill - but failing miserably and having Mike storm off time after time in the same manner. You did a good job of turning Mike's condition into something a little less dark with the humour that he entailed.


The ending was such a twist when Chester started to respond in the way he did. The slash scene was really well done *nods* Okay, it was bloody hot and I have a thing for sadistic Mike!!


I think you get the picture that I loved this, right?! You did a good job of turning evil mike into something kind of loveable? :) It rocked. *bows down*

From: crazyscaryfreak

Date: 2004-03-11

Chapter: 3

ooohhh! *gets tingle up spine* soooo good! awesome m'darlin!

From: Ambrosia

Date: 2004-03-10

Chapter: 3

im stunned..shocked..amazed


this fic was briliant! the way you brought us into mike's mind was amazing, everything you did just worked perfectly, and let me just say, i'm NEVER buying a computer from a store ever again! lol

From: apple

Email: too_cool_queenie@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-03-10

Chapter: 3

holy shit.

this was fucking awesome! i loved every word. damnit! i thought it was an excellent twist that chester wanted mike to do it, that he wanted him to hurt him, and i just KNEW that the little line that chester gave mike in the first chapter, about being a masochist, was a link to the last part of the story. i knew it. damnit! this was fucktacular! *does happy jig* very... rawr. evil. sexy. crazy. me definitely likey.


lovelovelovelovelove!

From: ~*ToXiC*~

Date: 2004-03-10

Chapter: 3

WO.......holy CRAP! Mike'z a PSYCHO!!!!..........i luv it

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