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From: usagi348

Email: animegirl2315@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-06-20

Chapter: 5

gosh! that was really hot!

I wanted to know what was going to happen to Mike *frowns*, anywayz, can't wait 2 read the next chapter!!! ^.^!

update plz!

From: Gummibear Queen

Date: 2004-06-20

Chapter: 5

MY god that was hot

*bows down and worships you oh great slash goddess*

I love Stephen Richard...mmm...yummy...he sang to me once...lalalala...off in my own little world now...lalalalala

Nice pics on your site btw

Can't wait for more

Bec

xx

From: d.d.

Date: 2004-06-20

Chapter: 5

My sincere apologies for not reviewing earlier. I know I promised you something intelligent but all I've got to say is incoherent babbling about how fucking hot that is! By that I mean to be including the entire story. It was hot before, but now that you have Mike in chains, gagged, whipped, and about to be fucked I can promise you have a fan for life in me. And that entire scene with Brad was amazing. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like that before. In specific, I liked the part where he was fucking himself with the dildo, but I think you got it exactly right when Stephen came along and 'helped out'. I can't wait for the next chapter... And Mike's turn... =)

From: hips.to.hop

Date: 2004-06-19

Chapter: 5

probably one of the most hardcore slash chapters i've ever read from you. AND it had brad. i'm not dissing that.


i liked the random stephen incorporation, though i have to say i was a little disappointed that we didn't get another lengthy brad jerkoff scene. that wouldn't have been as original though.


hmm... what else? i'm glad you have phe being kinda dominant sometimes, he gets really typecast sometimes i think.


can't wait to see what braddles does to mikey mike =op

From:

Date: 2004-06-19

Chapter: 5

Hot damn.


Dies, I love Stephen's appearances.

From: Homercles

Date: 2004-06-19

Chapter: 5

So happppppy you continued!! This is gettting very full of the kink now... lol.. YAY@!

From: loseroftheworld

Date: 2004-05-29

Chapter: 4

Awww! You continued...I love you! You're great

From: usagi348

Email: animegirl2315@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-05-02

Chapter: 4

hey!!!!

that's CRUELLL!!!

*lol*

naughty Phi and Chaz are playing games on their bandmates, sweet!!!

update plz!!

From: liberating.labia

Date: 2004-04-30

Chapter: 4

{gasp} stephen richards? phoenix? mike getting whipped? update please!

From: hips.to.hop

Date: 2004-04-26

Chapter: 4

aww man! it'd better be coming quickly...

From: Emerald Amber

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is brilliant! And oh sooo hot! I think that Phe is my eternal idol from now on!

Em.A.

From: prissygirl

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

good night !!!!!! Love the new name btw !


update !

From: crazyLPgirl

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

whoooo jes!! *humps you*

From: OrlyBloomlover

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

o man,thaz good, but why u gotta leave it there!!! evil one!! lol hurry and update

From: Oz LP fan

Email: trunks_mistress@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

hey please update this is hot!

From: the flaming redhead

Email:

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

...

mmmm

...thats it?!

more you evil weenie, more!!

(i have to take a cold shower now)

From: HR

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

You have my full attention now with this fic. Not that it wasn't vompletely hot beforehand, the whole idea of Chester and Phoenix having their way with Rob was incredibly hot and the peeping tom idea with the camera is great. But now i'm dying to see what will happen. What with Phoenix's slightly machoistic character and the whole vision of Mike and Joe being tied up like that has got me revved up for more.


Brilliant. Couldn't ask for more (or can I, hehe) from an author such as yourself. Update soon. I'm glad you decided to continue!

From: Geishaneko

Email: geishaneko@yahoo.co.uk

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

lol i kinda blinked and went cross-eyed when i got to the end of the page, i was expecting the rest heeh

i can wait though XD, great job!

::wonders where she can get a BBB sandwich::

From: Francessca

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

AH! I was expected a longer and sex-filled chapter. Lmao, update soon.

From: Ambrosia

Date: 2004-04-25

Chapter: 4

"By the end of the night, he’ll be on his knees begging to be fucked long and hard"


*ahem* I cant wait for the end of the night!

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