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Heated Pool by shinobi

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From: SteppinRazor

Email: LoggedOut@isLazy.ca

Date: 2008-05-01

Chapter: 1

*fans self*

woo! that was HOTT!! (yes, I spelled it with 2 "t"s so sue me *rolls eyes*)

That was a brilliantly fun read!

From: hellopa

Email:

Date: 2006-11-06

Chapter: 1

WOOHOO!That's all I have to say!!!OOOOHHHH Mike& Chester are really hot together!chester is a real sexy beast and Mike..oh he's extremely hot.......gosh I really got turned on actually!!thanks lol!!!

From: Andrea

Email:

Date: 2006-10-22

Chapter: 1

Loved it. As others have mentioned, there's something incredibly hot about Mike being high! Also, I loved how he seduced Chester, even though he was the bottom.

From: Bitty

Email:

Date: 2005-08-17

Chapter: 1

that was.....hot

excellent!

i loved it!

ttyl,

~Bitty~

From: candycanequeen

Email: simonetta216@cinci.rr.com

Date: 2005-06-07

Chapter: 1

aww.........

From: darkCherriez

Date: 2004-09-15

Chapter: 1

Super-kinky! There's nothing more orgy that two sexy guys (or girls) sinny dipping and playing hooky in a pool. SWEEEEEETTTTTT MIIINNNDDDDGGAAASSsMMMMMSSSSS!!! *big smiles* --*dee

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2004-08-27

Chapter: 1

Hott, that's all I need to say

From: Ambrosia

Date: 2004-08-09

Chapter: 1

*imagines mike and chester in my old pool* ahh how I miss my pool!

From: Ms.Gaia

Email: magaiamoore@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-07-31

Chapter: 1

ohhhh Pool hotness! =)

I really liked it!

From: BourdieBot

Date: 2004-07-28

Chapter: 1

fun stuff :D

From: .bennizzle.jizzle.

Email: cantankerouscancercaitiff@yahoo.com

Date: 2004-07-27

Chapter: 1

I loved it. Was very yum.

From: Emerald Amber

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

whimpering in lust...


SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! Love Mike's devious and lustful gazes! Everything was very, very hot! Burning hot!:D

Yet there is one tender, extra fluffy thing here and I guess that it is what will stay with me longer: Chester telling about their position in bed to sleep, and how it was supposed to be forever!!!!!!!! I'm in love...sigh.....

Em.A.

From: Francessca

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

That's cute. =) I'd love to see a Mike/Chester private pool party. Haha. That'd def be hot. =D

From: HR

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

Ahh, finally, some good smut. I have actually read this on your writing journal before, lol. I am kind of a sucker for the well written little m/c sex standalones. And i was immediately entranced by the idea of Mike being high and the way you described him taking his hits. There's something so incredibly hot about imagining that, lol.


And the swimming pool, always a good place to have sex. I always love the description and the actions, especially being pulled underwater and pinned to the bottom to be kissed. But as of course, Mike being the bottom (yey!) when it actually came to sex and the relationship in general. Lovely fic. :-)

From: Enigmatic

Email:

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

Oops, forgot to leave my username ^_^

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Email:

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

*thud*


Wow. That was hot O_O


I've read many fics where they have sex in a pool but this one is the best.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

cute

From: JLK

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

wow. good thing to read when you wake up. whoah. spica. lol. good job.

From: mu5icBtcH

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

lovely, very well written, can't wait for "Broken Trust"

From: redsky

Date: 2004-07-26

Chapter: 1

Shit, that was great! Me likey a LOT^^ Good job, girl!

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