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Fireworks by Goober

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From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-08-20

Chapter: 1

aww, beautiful. perfectly lovely, and i loved the ending XD

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2006-05-27

Chapter: 1

That was cute! I enjoyed it!

From: Alexia

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Date: 2005-03-07

Chapter: 1

AAAAWWWWWW that was cute and great for the fourth of july!!!!

From: Ambrosia

Date: 2004-03-29

Chapter: 1

ooh that was amazing! i loved it!

From: HazyEyes

Email: jessica_the_great@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-08-23

Chapter: 1

Again, another excellent story from you. I didn't think it was possible to top the other two I hread, but you sure did.

thanks for writing such a great story, I really enjoy reading these!

From: karolka

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Date: 2003-07-08

Chapter: 1

awwww. soooo sweet.. and soooo good and u should write more boylove scenes..

From: chazzygirl101

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Date: 2003-07-07

Chapter: 1

lol, 'aloe vera' good one!!! heh i think you have got a good thing goin here lol ( waiting for my mike-and-chaz-have-sex-sicle!!)

From: CoNzIsFrEaKyFuRcHaZzY

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Date: 2003-07-07

Chapter: 1

Omg, that was AWESOME!!


Hehe, it was cute, and hot, and funny, and okay imma stop now...:D


*dances around in happiness cuz the story was so good*


*hugs and hands u muffins*


I LOVED IT!!

From: Holly

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Date: 2003-07-06

Chapter: 1

omg that was ADORABLE!!


awesome story... keep up the writing!

From: Losing Grip

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Date: 2003-07-06

Chapter: 1

Awwww, that was so sweet. I loved it.

From: StonedRaider

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Date: 2003-07-06

Chapter: 1

^ ^ That was so awesome!


It was all cute and yea, and Brad's so cool, letting them fuck on his bed awwww!


Its funny cuz before the fireworks went off me and my friend were singing LP songs, except changing the words so it'd be about Mike and Chaz fucking, and then while the fireworks were going off I kept thinking wouldnt it be nice if they were fucking at that exact same moment...


K...I'm to obsessed with fucking, but it was a great fic, me likey!!!!

From: phoenixrai

Email: hanging@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-07-06

Chapter: 1

what a great story--my favourite lines


“You suck!” Phoenix yelled to Mike before giving him a look of mock betrayal.

“Yes he does.” Chester said from his chair.


just fantastic--you are so talented :)

From: crazyscaryfreak

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Date: 2003-07-05

Chapter: 1

i didn't like this......... i loved it! yay for you!

From: Silence

Email: younghopelessgrl@aol.com

Date: 2003-07-05

Chapter: 1

yep yep. i like

From: UniformChaos

Email: necrodite59@yahoo.com

Date: 2003-07-05

Chapter: 1

Awww yay. Yay for Brad understanding. That was nice, I liked it.

From: k

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Date: 2003-07-05

Chapter: 1

aaaaaw that was cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! ;)

From: LPUER

Email: hikari@kukamail.com

Date: 2003-07-04

Chapter: 1

hey great story just for the 4th of july. And happy 4th of july straight back at you. :) Hope you had a good 1.

From: Sorrow

Email: cryingsoulisdyin@netscape.net

Date: 2003-07-04

Chapter: 1

hehe it was good holiday gift hehe

From: Easier_to_run

Email: easier_to_run@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-07-04

Chapter: 1

Aww *double aww*

That was friggin awesome! Soo so so cute!

Loved it!

*stuffs your pockets with small blue teddybears and takes her 'Mike-and-Chaz-have-sex-sickles and scampers off with a smile on her lips*

From: UnwillinglyMasked

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Date: 2003-07-04

Chapter: 1

Lovely my dear. Spiffyness for the fourth, :)

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