Wow, downright wow...

This is so sad, and I have a certain policy against sad fics, and you might know what it is...

But this is definitely worth every second I spent reading it.

I'd LOVE to see more of your stuff.

Hathor...

Wonderfully splendid- I fell in love with it.

Even though it's so short, it's so powerful.

*claps and gives you a cookie!*

AWWW NO!!! ... Suprisingly I love this, ...(I hate death) BUT I LOVE THIS!

That was so sad! I was thinking "Awww how cute!" then got to the end and was like "Aww no :(". Great fic though =]

*huff* Oh my goodness ;____;!!!

That was so touching and sad, I love how short it is, I think its charming.

ohh ;; It almost made me cry. I really like it anyways <3

aw that was cute and sad! Wonderful job!

Oh my god that was so sad, so so sad. I pictured it in Mike's POV, so I guess Chester died in my head. Great standalone.

Aww , That was good. I picked Chester to be the one who died. :-/ Yes, Mike has to suffer. l0l

Awww that was sooo sad, I love it! Amazing!

oh my god

that was so sweet

and soo beautiful

god the last line is almost making me cry

awesome job..

-Bitty-

Ok if you want Mike to die, Mike dies! Oh my god the heartbreak!!! Not... even though it would be terrible, people still might pick Chester over Mike to die.

so i was right, it was intended.

oh well, i decide Mike is the one dead.

as i always do.

The whole point of this was you guys get to decide who dies! I hate when you write a story and people don't like when a certain character dies, so hopefully this solves the problem!! Mike or Chester:)

I actually liked this.

I would have loved to see it a little longer and why the 'significant other' died. Old age? Car accident? Suicide? Murder? GAH lol.

Other than that...loved the rain as a starting and an ending. :)

im so stupid, it says M/C on the resume... FORGET WHAT I SAID ::rolls eyes::

see what i mean? the author never said it was mike or chester. it could be joe talking about dave, or brad talking about monica, or whatever... but we all love and crave the good old bennoda ::rolls eyes::

Why every body kills Chester or Mike? Please don't do that. Poor them don't deserve it, but it was nice. I like rain and i like anything that has to do with it. It was a nice stand alone

It was good, but i have no idea whos talking. maybe that was your intention, and it ok. im going to think then that its chester talking about mike. one, because thats my fav couple, and two, because i tend to kill mike in all my stories, even though i love him deadly.

anyways, it was good!!

Me