aaaaaaaaaaaaw plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :(

So you need to update this. Pronto.

It's so surreal...the way you describe things like death or Chester's wounds.

And Mike's badass outbursts. Personally, I thought he was having a Tyra Banks moment.

There's nothing I love more than a dominant/abusive Joe...*stares off dreamily* and Brad is...I'm not sure what to think of him yet. Probably because this story hasn't been updated!

Hint.

please keep writing i want to know what's gonna go down!!!!

Hey wickd story i like it been reading it for the past few days and dig it..keep pounding the keys :)

Hey wickd story i like it been reading it for the past few days and dig it..keep pounding the keys :)

Im so hooked on this story. I'm like, slightly obsessed with ghosts and the like, and your description of Micheal's freak-out was fantastic!!

Awesome!!poor Chaz[T_T]...and I can't wait for the next!!!

Update soon,please!!

PS:I love evil Joe~LOL~

awesome chapter. i love the details and chester's going to die! OH NO!! :D

Brilliantbrilliantbrilliantbrilliantbrilliant. I'm at a loss for words besides the word BRILLIANT!!!!

Evil Joe is a hot Joe! This is great! Awww, poor Farrell. Now what?

ahahahaha cheese balls *giggles* that was a really good chapter! I feel so sorry for Chester that he has to give himself to someone like Joseph *cries* Update soon please.

-VP

I'm stuck with this story since the first chap. It's extremely well written and each chapter is very expressive. I can't wait for the next one

I absolutely LOVE this story. The imagery, the way your write, its just inspiring. Bit something dawned on my randomly while I was reading your ENTIRE story. Where is Robbie boo? It was weird when I noticed he wasn't in the story, but oh well, he can stay out and relax.

Nontheless, Amazing story, keep going.

:D

*dances* Yay! My nagging led to an update.

Anyway.

Michael's finnaly gone over the deep end, trying to kill Dave. It was a bit suprising he had such a tantrum, i was expecting him to get a wild look in his eyes and attack Dave dead on.

I wish Chester would just quit it with Joe, I mean, now he knows about Dave. He can get the info from him instead of getting raped all the time. He's making Mikey worry! XD

I can't wait to see how this goes, Mike is on the war path and Joe is really losing it to. And Poor Chester is caught in the middle.

Like I said, the imagery of it all makes me drool. Your writing is just...gah. No words to describe it. I can hardly believe this was written by someone who's around my age. You have an extremely bright future of writing ahead of you, I'm positive of that. :) Keep up the brilliant work!

aww i feel bad for chester. nice chapter as usual :D

I think that it's really amazing so far <3

You could probably add a /little/ more detail, but it's really great the way it is.

woo! I loved this chapter! I was so hyped when I saw that you had updated! Do it again yes? :D

-VP

"But now the past had become the inevitable future; ghosts of what used to be Joseph’s touches now gnarled into zombies, decayed corpses of what once lived but still roam the earth all the same, digging themselves free from their netherworldly chains and dragging Chester back into their hellish graves to be buried alive."

I don't know why but that line just simply rocks. It just does. I love your style of writing and your descriptions. I hope you continue writing more. =)

Oh! It pissed me off how Joe hurt Chaz like that. I've got mixed feelings on Chester giving his body to Joe for answers. To do that for someone you love is one thing, but on the other hand, Chester should've just kicked Joe's ass or something. lol. I guess I just want violence :p. Either way, it was great, especially how Mike stayed by the window and waited so patiently for his lover *sigh*

-danni