Poor Chester, having to deal with the guilt and the hate coming from Draven's mother. Glad for him to know that Draven still loves him, it gave him alittle peace in his life.

Otis is just so damn cute. I wish my five year old step daughter was that polite... LOL. When Chester was describing Draven, I nearly cried. I can imagine him getting all emotional because here is baby boy is a young man and his voice is deepening and he's basically a mini-Chester.. My daughter just turned 3 yesterday and I was comparing her to her baby photos XD sadness!

I hope Mike wakes up soon! Chester is trying so hard to be such a good father to his own kids and a supplement father to Otis..

I hope you update this soon!

Update!!! Ahhh!!! I looovvveee this!!

YAY! UPDATE!!!!!

First of all: The idea of bringing Draven in is AMAZING! Little Chazzy and big Chazzy looking after Otis <3

First I wasn't sure why Chester wanted ti kidnap otis, but then I realised it wont be much longer until Anna won't tolerate him around Otis anymore. It's so sad he just tries to do the right thing but at the same time knows he doesnt do it the right way.

Lol Draven seems so cool to me. Running away from boring grannys xD At the same time he seems honest enough to speak his mind- thats nice because Chester needs him to behonest now and probably the kids are th ebest company for him as they really tell him what they think.

I am so happy the update didnt take as long as the other one and I love all the Characters in your story..well almost all ;) Hope u can write more and update soon! *rates with 10 again*

See ya at the next chap! Love you ;)

NOO I DONT WANT MIKE TO DIE.

That was such a cool story bro,

good adjectives.

9/10

OMG PLZ UPDATE ASAP I LOVED IT!

I am sooo happy you updated!

okay..so here we go: I love Otis! he seems to be so much more grown up than he has to for his age! I love how he keeps Chester up although he is also sad about the state his father is in, but Chester cares for him and they clearly love each other..its so adorable.

Poor Chazzy.. I can so understand that he is trying everything to keep Otis save like he promised Mike! Of course its his fault, it cant be denied but you see he is so sorry and I think he would give his life to make Mike wake up again. It was so touching when he confessed him he loves him. I believe Mike can hear him! My heart almost stopped when they went into his room an he was gone! Don't you dare letting him die! xD Its so bad he caught that infection! I think the same way as Chester- they are supposed to prevent such things! idiots at the hospital..grrrrr... Again I loved Otis in the scene.

So.what is Chester doing, what is he planning? I mean...he just leaves and kisses him goodbye? Are you kidding me? Mike needs him more than even now!

OMG..please update soon, i can wait for more! *gives laptop, bennoda cookies and kinder bars* WRITE!

love u sis;) awesome chap!

OMG he just kidnapped Otis!!! review plz! Poor Mikey =(

Did I seriosly just misspilled 'Saviour' ?? *looks dumb* sorry, typo.

Anyhow, another shout out for you to update!

Don't. DON'T EVEN try to kill Mike. Not Mike.... *cries*

P.s: Welcome back!! I hope you update the Dean's list and 'savoir' soon! PlEASE *Bribe you with a cookies. Yummy cookies* :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that was so sad! I HOPE MIKE LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::pulls hair out:: T_T Update soon!

I can only imagine having all those regrets and not really being able to express them properly. Not to mention Chester is taking care of Mike's son... a constant reminder of all that he feels and everything that has happened. I hope Mike will wake up and forgives Chester and they will live happily ever after in a little land called Bennodaville!!!!!!

NOOO You can't kill Mike! *cries* D:

Ohh the poor little baby :( bless his heart I could cry. I hope mikes ok!! On a lighter note I was creased when Otis said he was hungry and chaz was like "yeah well... I can't cook" lmao like tough sh*t kid!! I know that's not how it was meant I just caught it ona funny moment heehee. Keep up the good work n update soon. Mwa XXXXXXX

I feel so bad for them. A five years old baby shouldn't blame himself, he just don't understand. Poor Chester having to deal with the guilt for basically taking Otis' daddy away.

Hope Mike wake up soon for both of their sakes.

I really wish Otis would stop feeling like it was his fault that Mike is in the hospital, it's a shame that he, like Chaz is suffering because of all this, and Anna needs to stop being a bitch. I'm glad you updated xx

aww poor Otis! *hugs him tightly*

Oh I luuurrrvvveeee it! Update update update!!!! *revs up tractors* I said update >.<

mm every night eh ;)

More please! Like they say, "Out the mouth of babes." Otis is very wise for his age.