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From: Dre

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Date: 2005-09-18

Chapter: 11

please, please, PLEASE make a sequel to this :"(


pretty please? *gives you tons of cookies and chocolate*

From: Easier2Run

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Date: 2005-03-28

Chapter: 11

I was imagining it was Brad in Rob's ass instead of the dildo too ;)

Although Brad could play with the dildo in Ron anytime...I assume :)

I've never reviewd this fic before( Not that I can remember anyway) but I've read every chapter, just so you know.

I liked this chapter very much, but I can't wait until Rob drops his teasing rule and lets Brad onto his bed.

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2005-03-27

Chapter: 11

That was very hot...sad to see its over!

From: PepsiCola

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Date: 2005-03-27

Chapter: 11

<333333333


*speechless*


how hot was that?! omg. *brain shrivels up and PepsiCola adds story to favorites*

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2005-03-24

Chapter: 10

This was HOT!

From: ~*eyeofthestorm~*

Date: 2005-03-24

Chapter: 10

*coughs* Umm...wow...lol...The first part was funy with Joe and the Ice thing the second part made me crack up laughin cuz Rob has a dildo...lmao..sorry, Thats just funny pictureing Rob with a dildo..lol


<3Jen

From: Silent Treatment

Date: 2005-03-19

Chapter: 9

You are such a crazy fucker Jess! And god do I love you for it! Only you would think of things such as this *shakes head* Love it as always ;)

From: cRiSpY cReAm

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Date: 2005-03-17

Chapter: 9

OWWWW!! my nipple!!! o god, so glad i dont have a penis...that would hurt a tad.. my nipples hurt! AHHH! lol update? later

From: cRiSpY cReAm

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Date: 2005-03-02

Chapter: 8

o jeez they like it rough...so stephen bit brads tongue? hehe i like this cat and mouse game..update? ciao

From: lpsoulseeker

Email: animegirl2315@hotmail.com

Date: 2005-03-01

Chapter: 8

OMG! this is always hot! I mean... like... WOW O_O *drools* I think that's all I can do, review and drool, coz... this is just awesome!!! and imagining Stephen, OMG! coz you know, he's like sooooo hot! ^.^

great work, keep it up =D

From: Linkin_Park_Rocks

Email: wackyme909@hotmail.com

Date: 2005-02-26

Chapter: 7

whoosies?


-im a dork and proud-

From: Bam's_Black_Rose

Date: 2005-02-26

Chapter: 7

OH MY GOD

UPADATE OR DIE

GREAT STORY

KEEP GOING

From: HR

Date: 2005-01-10

Chapter: 6

Do you know how long i've been waiting for an update on this. You can't just have Mike hanging in the balance waiting to be fucked and just stop for such a lengthy period of time!! *breathes* Damn, that was seriously hardcore but i expect nothing less from you :) And in that dark-ish way it's incredibly hot, the lapping of the blood, the piercings of course which imagining on Mike are or so hot and the piercing taking place at the time there. You combine elements of pleasure and pain to Mike and we're unsure as to whether he enjoys it or not.


The slightly distubed image, though is imagining Chester tearing his skin away to get the barcode off. And like everyone else i'm wondering, why? What happened and where the hell is Phoenix? What was an innocent little web cam sex spying has turned into something quite dark. I commend. *nods*

From: Angela

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Date: 2005-01-09

Chapter: 6

that was a really great chapter but got toyally confused at the end

From: cRiSpY cReAm

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Date: 2005-01-09

Chapter: 6

that was one painful chappie...o jeez when i read about mike's nipple piercing being ripped out i had to cover my boobs i HATE that...o jeez his poor penis....what how did brad get burned while his hand was on chesters neck? thats weird..and now whats up with chester? o jeez you should update!!! i want to know! ciao and great stuff!

From: Koinu

Date: 2005-01-09

Chapter: 6

*begins to happilly jump up and down and screaming* omg!!! you finally updated!!! YAY!!!! ok, better stop before i get on your nerves. heh. yeah, i've been waiting for this story to be updated for the longest time and i'm glad it is!!! i'm so fucking glad!! this is, like, the greatest sexiest...yeah, story ever! it really is helping me with my yaoi sex scenes since i've only started writing them about a year ago. >.< i'm not that good...but i really should post one up here eventually. sigh. but yeah, loved this chapter. it was awesome. sexy. omg. Mikey getting his dick pierced..omfg...that was awesome. i do feel sorry for him though. poor thing passed out and everything. please update soon!! this long ass wait was worth it, and i cant wait for the next! what is Chester doing? must know!!! update!!! ^.^

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2005-01-08

Chapter: 6

God that was a strange engind to the chapter....but it was good none the less

From: prissygirl

Date: 2005-01-08

Chapter: 6

*GASPS* omg *falls over*

From: Ambrosia

Date: 2004-08-08

Chapter: 5

oh damn that was freaking HOT!

From: Francessca

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 5

Wow, dead sexy. =) Ouch, Brad got fucked by a dildo and penis at the same time? O_O

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