My Review Cont.

Sorry...I clicked submit without realizing I wasn't finished :D!

But yeah. Again with the characters. These were probably some of the most developed characters I've read in a fanfic. They all had a purpose and they all served that purpose. I love how at first Chester wasn't friends with these people, but by the end they had become his best buds. Putting in that car scene was probably one of my favorite parts in this story. It had a good dose of suspense that made me really want to know what was going to happen. It also mesmerized me with how it slyly brought Chester together with the one guy you'd never expect him to be friends with.

...Just thinking about this story again just gets me excited hehe. I REALLY liked it. It even inspired me to do a fanfiction of my own. I've posted it...not sure how it'll turn out. I'm a much better reader than I am a writer lol.

But yeah. keep up the amazing work and I'll make sure to check out anything else you may have on here to read.

Thanks for an amazing story and I hope you enjoyed my lengthly review hehe (I know ya prolly don't get them that often)

Just want to let you know right off that not only was this the first fic I read on here and so far it's the best. I sat and read this all in about 2 days and it was one of the most engaging fanfictions I've ever read. The characters were multi layered and realistic. Chester's downfall was a bit much to bear, but the hope for a better future was always in the reader's mind so that helped a bit.

This story had so many high points, but it did have some low ones too. Not enough to overshadow the high ones, but abundant enough to cause a bit of a problem. My biggest issue was grammar and spelling. I know this is usually the hardest bit to take care of, ESPICALLY without the aid of a beta, but it is still important. This became less of a problem as the chapters went on; your writing obviously improving throughout the fic.

Another thing I had a problem with was the sort of cultural things. I'm assuming you're from the U.K. because of the way you write and of course when you are writing your stories you write in the U.K. mentality. The biggest thing I noticed about this difference in culture was the whole Mike getting drunk and his parent's being fine with it. As far as I know, over in your country 16 years old is the legal age for drinking. In the USA it's 21. So of course I was reading that and thinking "That would never happen in an American household" Not that there is anything wrong with a English upbringing, I actually support the 16 year old age limit on drinking, it's just that it didn't fit well with the story, seeing as they are Americans living in America.

But, as I said, overall it was amazing and I loved every second of it.

0.0 great story. U did really good with ur slash :)

*le sigh*

I love this story..it is genius..you are ah-mazing..

-Bitty-

Told ya I'd come back, didn't I? =D

Well first of all I must compliment you on your writing technique and point of view for the characters, it made me feel like it was real and I was very into the story. Next, I want to praise you on your plotline. You came up with a magnificent story and it deserves to be published. Really. Well, since it uses their names, maybe change it. THEN SELL IT! Heh. But when I had to get off of the computer every night I would delay it as long as I could because I just wanted to keep reading the story, not wanting to stop until I was finished with the entire thing. And, I must say, for your first time doing slash it sounds better than a lot of other writers I know of, who are also slash writers. Following Chester and Mike through his depressive states and drug abuse kept me going. And when he'd frozen and temporarily, oh, I'd nearly had a panic attack myself. I barely got any sleep one night because I was so into wondering what would happen next. And how long did I want them to kiss? Oh, forever when I got hinting at it. And when they did, it was wonderful! Everything was timed just right. The ending, I thought I would die. I was as scared as Mike was when I was reading it; as worried when Chester jumped through the window and got shot; and so very close to crying when he would. But the singing part at the end, how much did I want to be there! You're a wonderful author and should continue writing!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH!

Even though you hate it, I must say you are a fantastic writer, even with a few spelling mistakes, and the English spellings.

Honestly, it's an amazing plot and storyline, and you wrote it wonderfully! I would have so much more to say, but I've finished it in 3 days and I'm short on time, I'll give my full review later. I LOVE THIS STORY!

Okay...i finally finished it..been reading all day...

MIKE SAVE HIM HOLY CRAP {only on chapt.4}

This story was amazing. Very well thought out and written (with the exceptionon a few spelling/grammatical errors, but we'll let those slide). The plotline was very interesting and kept me coming back. You made Mike and Chester so perfect! And everyone else, the whole situation...anybody who is or ever was in high school can understand what the school environment can be like. I loved it. The only negative I can think of is the lacation. Linkin Park resides in California, but you made them very English. I understand that this may be because you're English (sorry if I'm wrong), but at one point, you placed then in SoHo, which is in New York City. It was a bit odd to follow, but didn't take away from the story at all. Still a great job on you part. Good work, keep it up.

That story was really good. You need to have more confidence in yourself. I'm glad the ending was happy. The whole story was well written and a few parts almost made me cry!!

YAY! happy endings! I looooveee happy endings!

hey, ch. 25 is the Christmas chapter and Christmas is on the 25th. cool.

well this is like the 2nd or 3rd time i've read this and i'm still in awe.

fucking beautiful job man!

~Bitty~

work more on the sequel!!!

Woo! i love this story....

I can just say one thing: WOW!

I've read this story nonstop now, for about two days! :P Im sure you've heard it before, but Im gonna say it anyways: THIS STORY IS FUCKIN' AMAZING!!

All my love too you and be sure not to ever stop writing! ^^ //Simone in sweden

Like you need anymore reviews to tell you how awesome this story...but, since I've just finished reading it, I guess I'll tell you what I thought. You know, this story has kept me entertained the whole way through. I L-O-V-E-D it! Life has been so freaking shitty lately, and the only thing I had to look forward to was reading this story, so I'm so glad you wrote it! It got my mind off reality and that's always a good thing. I'm also very happy that ended happily. You're an awesome author and this was a very amazing story!

OMG

I FUCKIN LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GREAT GOD DAMN JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Bitty~

see, I reviewed. !! mwaha. This story was good. So original. It's long and understanding and I really enjoyed reading it. Took me 2 days tho but hey, it was worth it. You should make another story that I would fall in love with.

wow,this was so amazing. this is the best story I`ve ever read in my entire life...

lots of luv,

charlotte

Hi

This is actually the second time i read your story, just because it's that incredible. And i have to admit i cried a lot throughout the entire story.

I seriously adored your story. I made my friend read it(well the beginning) and she got hooked too. Now, she can't stop reading either hehe.

You did an incredible job and congrats for having the patience to write this much without repeating yourself or sounding boring.

Much love.