hey this has been an awesome story, it was the first story I read on this site, your plot was awesome. grammar, spelling and story line was excellnt. You should be very proud of this story congratulatins(sp) I wish you the best of luck in your writing in the future, this is honastly the best fan fic I've ever read.

Love Liz

That was the most incredible story ever. I feel like I know them all so intimately and so well. Each character you've fleshed out so beautifully and imbued with intricacies and nuances all their own. I'll never forget any of your characters; I'm too emotionally attached. They all feel like family.

I must admit that as I read the last chapter, I was filled with mixed emotions; overjoyed at the beauty of your writing and the tender sweet affection that was shared, and sad to see the story ending.

"he still felt like it was with him, like a half finished book still open waiting to be read. He couldn’t just close the book, constantly returning to it to read the previous pages."

That's exactly how I feel, this story will always be with me. I'll never forget Chester and Mike crashing the party, or Chester's desperate homelessness, or the chilling events that led to such a hopeful and wonderful ending. I haven't always commented, but I'm doing it now, and I just wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I sincerely hope that I get to read more from you in the future, and soon would be really nice too ;-) Cheers!

I´m pretty sure I´ll die if you don´t write a sequel!! So pleeeeease don´t kill me or I´ll not be able to review your stories in the future!

that was an awesome story! great job. Im so glad it had a happy ending, if one more thing would have happend to chester i think i would have cried. lol. well yeah awesome story!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you sooooo much for a happy ending! I was really pleased with the final chapter, even though the beginning was extremely tense and I was definitely close to tears. Any plans for a sequel? If none, that's cool, I like it just as it is. You truly are a brilliant writer and this fic was everything I like -- intense, romantic, dramatic, witty, and intelligent. Thank you so much.

That was by far the most amazing story I have read. *grabs tissues and hugs self*

You should make the whole thing downloadable! i would love to donwload this story!

Wow! yay happy ending! weeee!!!! hehe, i love it because in my head i can put my flash forward to them all being in a band buwahah! wonderful story. i think it would make a good book actually! AWESOME WRITING! sigh =D loved it..

Wow, its over. Sad but very nice to know the ending! Thank goodness Chester suvived...I couldn't stand that, to see Chester die and then Mike be depressed forever. That would be such a terrible ending to such an amazing story.

I really am glad that the relationship with Chester and Peter is starting to grow. When Peter said that he saw talent in him, that was touching. The whole singing infront of the audience was very nice it was a way for him to begin a new chapter of his life.

Overall, it was just such a great story...and it takes an good writer to make it. So good job with the story I loved it!! :D

Anne

ooohhh that was a great ! ::applauds:: I love this story soooo much, your an awesome writer. I'm happy w/ the ending...although I thought u coulda elaborate more on the sex..but thats cuz I'm a freak hehe, good job!

IT'S OVER! IT CAN'T BE!

Yet... it is.

Arg.

But now onto the part of this review that DOESN'T make me sound like a crazed person.

The story was told soooo very PERFECTLY. Like you are seriously seeing a piece of someone's life as linear as they would see it. Like all these things that happened during the stories are the readers memories and stuff, regardless of the third-person. And you can dreg up all these memories when things happen that relate back to them. I can't count how many times something happened in this story... and then so much else went on that I forgot about it... and then it was brought back up in some way. That's one massive body of work you've got. And I love it.

Excellently well detailed and fabulously told beginning to end... and I probably would've murdered someone if you had just let Chester die on us!

-Sigh- Disregard most of this review. It made sense in my head!

*Malfunctions*

I love you so much for this story!

And I'm so glad it has a happy ending! I thought I was gonna cry when Chaz jumped out the window, but alas, he didn't die.

A very, very nice story. And that is one of the understatements of the century. I look up to you as an author.

Wow, I can't get over how great this story is. One minute I'm crying my eyes out, the next I'm getting warm little fuzzies! This has to be one of my most favourite stories ever. *gives you a huge cookie*

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute i love ur story it's the best the ending was awsome i think im gonna cry *cries* *hugs kritie*

I love/d your story. you did such a great work, please keep writing. and thank you

I'm crying, aaawww that was so sweet, Chester is sooo cute as is Mike, I love happy endings

I think I almost hate you.

One moment you have me ready to be bawling my eyes out, the next you have me squealing and grinning like a madman!!

I've been following this story from the start, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed that much *slaps herself for being lazy*.

I truly loved this story, i really did and thank you thank you for finally making a story where Chaz doesn't die in the end *hugs tightly*

Even if you would have killed him, I would have loved it anyway.

I hope you do another story soon, because all your stories so far leave me in awe. Honest.

*hugs again*

Thank you for making a brilliant story.

There's nothing more I can say really. You get A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++!!!

Take care 'til next time sweetie!

-Carro

ps. feel free to email me sometime if you wanna talk! *snugs*

Oh thank you, for not letting Chester die! This is one of the best stories I´ve ever read. Your writing is awesome. Every single update made my day.

Thanks for writing!

I'm so happy you finshed it you have inspired me to get off my ass and start working on my story... the ending was awesome my heart skipped so many beats randomly with this story and thank you for letting chester live i wouldve been quite depressed if he had died lol I cant wait to se what you do next <3!

I've been reading this story since you first started it. It's soooo captivating and non-cliche. The progression was perfect and you made it as close to reality as possible and still managed to keep the happy ending! Well done!