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High School Divide by Kirstie

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From: Marz&Dee

Date: 2005-06-14

Chapter: 9

God, i've waited almost 2 weeks to review this damn thing!! That's how long it took me to read it, cuz i read like a couple chapters a day...anywais...


first, i would like to say, if you post a chapter, and you personally dont like it...then how do u expect your readers to like it if you dont? that doesnt make alot of sense, but then i dont think u give your work enouth credit because everytime u said a chapter was crap i read it and thought "what the hell? this chapter is AMAZING" just like the rest of the story, but anywais....


another thing that sort of ticked me off was your grammar and spelling, but i could live with it!


anywais, overall, this story was FUCKING AMAZING! im kind of sad that it's done..u should write, like, their NEXT year or something...at first when i started reading i was SOO mad that it was so long, but as i reached the end i got sad cuz i didnt want it to end...oh well...*shrugs* but i LOOOVE this story, it's amazing! original and cool and yea....it made me CRY!!! SOO Badly! seriously, i couldnt see the words properly cuz i was crying..hahaha...and i dont cry easily so...haha..anywais, congrats on this story! thank you for writing it..just GIVE YOURSELF MORE CREDIT NEXT TIME ALRIGHT?? k...take care!! BYE!! =) **hugs**


-MarZ

From: TriedToGiveYouWarning

Date: 2005-05-31

Chapter: 9

I've finally finished reading! It was great, I loved it!!!

From: fruitjuiceuniverse

Date: 2005-05-30

Chapter: 9

I spread this fiction out over about a week of reading. I would have liked to take a go at it in one sitting, but at times I became too emotional to keep going. I always came back to it though. You have a brilliant way of telling a story and illustrating so many characters. You had a large cast, and yet, you never let a single one get away without decent description and plot-integrity. Each character was created with at least one very endearing and unique quality (excluding Eve in the endearing part...hehe). You created an immensely broad spectrum of personalities, and so effortlessly at that. Truly amazing. This story is very heartfelt and genuine. It's got everything anyone could want in a fiction: Romance, angst, drama, action, suspense, and of course - a happy ending. Thank you for that, as I had become worried before the epilogue. I am so glad I read this. It truly has expanded my faith in fan fiction writers. Online writers in general, as well. You are very talented, and it was an honor to be able to experience such a wonderful story. :)

From: Hahn

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Date: 2005-05-16

Chapter: 9

‘Awwww man, oh this is so cool- oh man this rocks, oh YES!’ He punched the air.


that SO sounds like how Mike would act in middle school! *giggles*

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2005-04-23

Chapter: 9

I'm soo glad everything worked out for Chaz! Well done!

From: Alyson

Date: 2005-04-18

Chapter: 9

I love this story, it is so good, better than good, great. Its probably one of my favourite stories, and its so sad about chester but im so glad hes happy in the end.

From: Diandra

Date: 2005-03-27

Chapter: 9

ohhhhh gosh. I had stopped reading this because of school and whatnot, and I just couldn't handle reading it all in one night because my eyes would hurt too much lmao but now that I'm on break I was able to catch up and uh WOW! I definitely thought Chester was going to die so that completely broke my heart but once I saw that line of Chester's in the prologue, my heart just went SAKJDKSJD YAYY!! hahaha. gosh this chapter was so emotional too! I nearly cried like all the way through because of how real and dramatic and romantic and and and well you know, it was lmao ;] but yea I just want to compliment you on such a wonderful and heart touching story you've written! I would recommend it to every lp fanfic lover out there.


<3 Diandra

From: Silent Treatment

Date: 2005-03-08

Chapter: 9

That was completely and utterly...awesome! I'm so glad it ended the way it did! I took a bit of time off from reading it but I'm so glad I finished it! Your a great writer Kirstie so never stop! *gives you a huge hug* God I loved this story so much ^_^

From: Pickles

Date: 2005-03-04

Chapter: 9

i love this story. everything about it. so freaking awsome. and real. you are a great writter and this is deffinitely a favorite of mine. just know that i love you *lunges at you and hugs you*

no...don't run away...

From: Ice-Puppet

Email: kari_yuy@hotmail.com

Date: 2005-01-30

Chapter: 9

Took me forever to read, but it was well worth it!


By far the cutest M/C I have EVER read! <3


Good job! Thanks for the wonderful fanfic!

From: ASiANCHiKNXTDOOR

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Date: 2005-01-30

Chapter: 9

WOW.. THAT.. WAS.. AMAZIIIIIIIING!!!!!!!!

From: lulu

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Date: 2005-01-30

Chapter: 9

that was awsome !

From: (Anonymous) Liz

Email: blondemoment4591@yahoo.com

Date: 2005-01-27

Chapter: 9

That was an amazing story. You did a great job, dear. You should get this published, but just change the band members so you won't get sued for having Chester and Mike screw each other, and making Brad such a mean pansy bitch inthe beginning. -laughs- I mean it, that story's publish-worthy. Think about it. :)

From: Chester_Crazy06

Date: 2004-12-28

Chapter: 9

AWSOME!!!!!!! BRILLIANT!!!!! I absoloutly fell in love with this story.(Even though it made me depressed because it was so sad)--your very talented...... I think this would have to be'one'of my all time favourites. I rated the story 10/10 :)

From: LPsuperFAN

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Date: 2004-12-16

Chapter: 9

hey that was the best story i have read!!!!!!!!!!

it was so good. hope to read more of your stories soon.


luv the story

by

From: Anne

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Date: 2004-12-08

Chapter: 9

Wow, what a great ending! the you that you put at the end just made it awesome. I love this story, I've been reading it since you put it up and I'm alittle sad that its the end, but it's a good ending,you are a brilliant writer and I hope to read more from you.

From: xxdarktearsxx

Date: 2004-12-05

Chapter: 9

You are by far the most talented writer on lpfiction I have ever read, I appreciate your constant updates and i'm really going to miss this story. If you could.. maybe you can make a sequal?! *begs begs begs* I'll love you forever, hope to see you soon hun!

From: TNG

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Date: 2004-12-02

Chapter: 9

Umm... well that was a good story :D Thank you so very much for not killing Chaz, after ALL he went through it WOULD be pretty evil to kill him. It was pretty cliche (but in a good way)when Chester could only remember the lyrics to Another day in paradise :P It sereously set me off laughing just like some other parts of the story that weren't really meant to be a joke.. Oh and I think in the end Brad turned out to be Joe's on-line gf and they all lived happily ever after.. in my dreams. Thank you again for the story!!!

From: peppermilkshake

Email: pepper_chan089@yahoo.com.mx

Date: 2004-11-23

Chapter: 9

Great Kirstie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just want to say that you are more than amazing,this fic it´s the best ^_^ you make me cry,smile...and most of all you make me happy :)

Sounds kinda weird but plz try to make a movie about this history XD.... anyways you are brilliant and this was a very cute ending :3 congratulations girl !!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 2004-11-23

Chapter: 9

im glad you didn't kill chaz, love your story!!

hugs and kisses >.<

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