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Vicious Cycle by xXloversxfadexX

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From: LpReem92

Date: 2010-11-21

Chapter: 5

This one is one of my favourite story written by you, well, after WSC and Dimmonddd It's cool, and the I'm-Korean-Japaness-hate-me is very true, I heard stories as well about it.


I was wondering why Mike would abuse Chaz like this, but then the Joe thing made it clear, and awww, poor Joey and sick Mikey *smak him*

Mike is so weird in this. I know, I should be like'Joe is a bad person' but you knoe me, I'm obssessed with him and I'm a hardcore Joe fangirl, and even if you made him the weirdest dude on the plant --which you have-- I will always say he's awesome.


"I feel like we were over for tea or something. It's surreal." Haha. I cracked up laughing at this.


Loved it!


>3< Reem

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-07-14

Chapter: 5

Oh my god!!! Weak Chazzy muuu! Just pure love! I think I was too sceptical, I saw hahnnoda and just didn't read. I have to learn to be more openminded cause u totally pulled this off Hun-Fucking class. Absolute love <3

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-07-14

Chapter: 5

Hun...wow I'm so stunned...thank u. I'm sorry I was so slow to hop on the bandwagon but I'm in a hurry now, as soon as I can I'll review x x x x

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-20

Chapter: 5

idk its good or bad for them, but I think this is the easiest way to them. if there are a sadism and a masochism, then abuse is love. Mike let Chaz's body remember this. so I think this is a kind of happy end? lol

good story~ :D

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-06-20

Chapter: 5

Really loved loved this one! Amazing epilogue and fucking hot sex scene too :)

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-06-20

Chapter: 5

Chester finally sees that Mike do not want to change. He finally can just let go. The only people who can change is themselves. It's up to Mike and Joe.

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-06-20

Chapter: 5

:O damn mike! >.<

at least Chester knows it's not worth it

that was so good, cool ending :)

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-06-12

Chapter: 4

I just read the 4 chapters and woah.. That was amazing.

Update soon! :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-06-11

Chapter: 4

it's over? aw sadness...

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-06-11

Chapter: 4

Dang! It did explain why Joe and Mike is like this. Mike is truly a sad and weak man! Chester is the boss again, wonder for how long.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-02

Chapter: 3

That could explain why Joe like this, well at last Joe's warped conduct not targeted to individual, to Mike. Joe just another guy need help.


And I love the part Chaz and Mike told love to each other. there need love to warm their soul.


Good chapter! Waiting for the next! :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-06-02

Chapter: 3

oh wow that was a good chapter :) it was amazing!!!!! Poor Joey :(

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-06-02

Chapter: 3

The moment Joe found out that Mike was Japanese, those falshbacks came roaring back into his life. That would explain why Joe acts that way to Mike.


Mike don't have nothing to feel guilty about. He didn't cause this pain in Joe's life. But it don't help Joe by accepting all the mess Joe put in his life and in turn place this in Chester's life.


I hope they work this out. Going to take a long time, but if it works, all their lives will be so much better.

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-06-02

Chapter: 3

Man, that was a good and really interestig chapter! I like how you write, maybe the chapters are a little bit short but they're good anyway! cant wait to read the sequel ^^

From: KingMichael

Date: 2009-06-02

Chapter: 2

oh, poor chaz and hope mike treat him more better..but.I think the story is interesting..update please!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-01

Chapter: 2

Hummm, think about the same question too, what made Joe so twisted?


This a new interesting point, dont know why but i like them all haha XD and really love Chaz at there for Mike, like he shares Mike's hurt, doesn't let him feel alone.


Anyway, love this chapter~ waiting for the next~ :D

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-06-01

Chapter: 2

For some reason, I don't pity either of them. Mike is a sad excuse for a human cause he let Joe beat him down and like it. But trying to make Chester be just like him makes him worst then Joe.


Don't pity Chester cause I'm sure he don't know what true love is either. Taking all the abuse to make Mike feel better.


I know this Joe is a monster but he showed it from the beginning. But the question got me wondering about him too now. Can't wait for the answer!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-06-01

Chapter: 2

hmmm interesting, I too would like to know what made Joe into what he is now. Waiting patiently for an update :)

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-06-01

Chapter: 2

Ok, now I really, srsly, like it! It's a really good story!!Hope you update soon next chapter ^^

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-01

Chapter: 1

Wow~ this fic! XDDD


About the first part, even a angry Mike did that to Chaz, Chaz still love him, and care about him, that feeling good~

And read the last part, will the monster Joe do something to Chaz and Mike again?


Please update soon~ wanna know what will happen~ :D

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