This was the first story I remember reading here...well flog, we were then then. Back then it was just a chapter long but the characters were so different to all the other stories at the time. I've read it now, as I've done with many other stories here these past few weeks and have been utterly rereading this. I don't think I've slept for 2 full nights, I know you will sympathise with the sleep loss.

I love the characters, every single one of them is unique and different and lasts for the length of the story. The original characters are fun, scary and inventive, and the LP guys are great, without being hyped up versions of them. There is a damn good plot and I feel a perfect amount of angst, drama, romance and teenage nonsense.

Reading now, I am loving the Britishness of the writing, not once did you try to make this Americanisd and I love that. I'm glad none of your betas changed that or made you remove the Yorkshire puddings. I've read a few comments about grammar and betas and I honestly say to them all "go fuck yourself!" This was your first story and an incredible one, change the names and set the story in Leeds then get this published poppet

Dearest author... I've been a member of this site since end of 2013 and this is the first time I'm reading this fic. I've put off reading it bc teen-fic are not my favourite genre. But I'm glad I read this. The storyline is brilliant, the characters' evolve at the right pace and the whole setting of this fic is pure genius. You're an amazing author and I sincerely hope you'll continue to write, may it be professionally or as a pastime. Thanks for sharing your storie with us. Rated.

Very emotional and no doubt one of my favorite fanfics! Absolutely loved it

Sooo I just found this, incredibly late. And I LOVED it! The emotions that you portrayed were so intense and I found myself in tears several times. I'm starting on Divided We Fall now, and I expect it'll take me a while to get through it (took nearly a week to finish this one!) but no doubt I'll love it just as much. Awesome job!

On chap 9

On chap 9

I read this entire story in a day; from 2:00 in the morning to 12:00 at night. I can't even remember the last time I peed. I just couldn't seem to stop reading, the plot had so many twists and exciting events. You have a talent at writing and I want to say thank you. You just gave me one of my favorite stories on this entire site. The ending was perfect.

This is the best fanfiction ever made of all fanfictions in any fandom. Period.

First LPfic I've read.....This right here will remain with me forever and ever. This story is amazing, I almost had a heart attack though when chester got shot

Okay, this was a long, epic story you got here :D I've read everything and I think it is a great story about anxiety feelings... Love... and hate. I love how you put many different, unusual things.. Such as Eve being in love with her brother... Chester getting raped by Eve... Mike and Chester in a sudden love contact. Great story. Will love it forever, my friend :D

I have just started reading LP fan fiction and i love your story sooo much....the storyline was great and u r an amazing writer....il neva 4get dis story...looking forward to ur next one... :)

I love this story so much. But I have a two major problems with it.

First, the grammar is not very reasonable for posting up on LPF. If you used a word program like Microsoft Word, you could've corrected it with the spellchecker, or you could've gotten a [better] beta.

Second, I think there's just a tiny bit too much angst. For example, the last 4/5 chapters are basically straight angst. I understand that you write a lot of angst, but stretching it out for four chapters is a bit too much.

But overall the story is very well written, and the characters are lined up nicely. The angst is strong enough to actually make people cry, you're getting somewhere with that. ;)

This is actually my first time critisizing lol

Okay, so when I first read this story(I've read it all the way through already) it made me cry so much. It was real, rough, heart-warming...amazing. I love this story. I've read part of the second part to this, and I liked it...But I stopped reading it, (and I know that sounds horrible because it make it seem like I didn't like it because I did. I liked it alot) but something inside my heart told me to stop reading because something bad would happen. Like there was an ache in my heart from reading it because it was almost sad..

But I just wanted to tell you that I love this story, it's one of my favorites. =)

Oopsy I switched your review with another persons...silly me *blushes*

ANYWAY correcting my last review!!! I really liked this story...sort of slow beginning which left me a bit...tired...but once I read a few chapters, damn I couldn't stop reading. Good storyline, well written...can't really fault it much at all ^^

This fic was a really good read for me. Although...I hate you for the ending cuz it literally made me cry at 4AM in the morning so I couldn't sleep well after that.

But wow, I really did like this. The short chapters annoyed me at first cuz I just wanted more...but after a while I realised it made the story more easier to read instead of scrolling down a page for 12 hours.

I just read the whole story...and I can't say anything but all that has already been said: this fic is brilliant and really one of the best ever written on this site!!!!!

now I'm gonna reading the sequel!and put this in my favs!!thank you for writing this!

have i commented on this yet? I thought i did.. whatever.. BEST STORY ON THE SITE. i swearz! >_> I really do love it *hugs chazzy and mikey* i want them for maself! v_v

i`ve just finished reading this story and it was awesome!!! i loved it

i don`t know what else to say

i think it`s one of the best stories i`ve ever read

thanks for writing it!!!

Evey fucking creeps me out!! ICK! Chester was raped and he doens't even remember!!! ewww!! there is like ripples running through my body to get rid of this feeling!! but it was really well written :D

OOOOOOO right~I read over! you story are so fascinating! U write little poor chester and little artist mike >_<~~!I love so much!!

you are a good/wonderful writer!!i like that feel~! <3kiss continue~~

PS I keep reading you nex chapter~ divided we fall~~~