first of all, i just wanna apologize for not reviewing your last chapter. dunno how i missed that, but i'm sorry, and i don't intend to miss any more. :)

now for the review. this chapter was great, even without the slash stuff. you're taking your time with the m/c relationship, and i like that because it makes the story more realistic. skipping all the drama and just getting to the slash is the easy way out; you've obviously taken the time to tell a story as well, and i commend you for that, as it is a hard thing to do.

you make mike and chester such a cute couple in this story, how they hold hands and...just general cute stuff like that! and i like that you make them have arguements and stuff instead of having them be the "perfect" couple. again, it makes it more realistic when even mike and chester have fights. :)

other stuff i liked...the part where mike got to chester's house and had second thoughts about chester loving him. that was a really good scene, the emotions were really believeable. i can totally picture mike thinking something like that in that situation. oh, and i also liked how you didn't write this big "kiss and make up" scene after they fought in the hotel. mike's nightmare was obviously enough to make chaz's anger die down. :)

well i've gone on enough. thanks for updating, my week's been hell and you made it SO much better. :)

aww i feel bad for both of them sorta lol

this is a really great story though and i was hoping you would update today :D

update soon!

I love all your fics ray!! You are a great writer! I even recremended you on my personal profile, you are such an inspiration!!! I love you!!! ...... uh, yeah, Im a little nuts..... PLEASE FINISH!!!

Ooooh! Great great job! You have to update.. must read.. more... lol! ^.^

Oh that was more than good, it was awesome. I luv it, Update soon please!!!

OMYGOD! This is BY FAR the MOST BESTEST STORY EVER! YOU HEAR ME?! BEST. STORY. EVER!

Thank god! WHOOOOOO!!!! yayay!!!!

this story totally rocks please finish the damned thing!!!!

\m/ rock on BROTHAH!

hell yeah that was awesome!!

i love this story... can't wait for the next chappy

so update soon!

that was so cute :) i loved this chapter :) and yep ;) mike needs time ... you got that right :P lol ;) anyways i'm hyper ... i'll be waiting for more :P

Yey!! You updated and it was a brilliant update. I love the fluffiness and cuteness of Mikey and Chazzy. Chester really showed he cared and tried to take Mike's thoughts away from that bastard Mark :-D. I loved it!!!!!!!!!

SLASH SLASH SLASH!!! bring on the SLASH!!!

tehee...that was great...i wonder whats gonna happen with sam?? dun dun dun!!! much loves

ur evil.. evil i tell you... how could u have stopped there... great story.... Update!!!

Yesh I AM hanging. :( But I'm not happy! I want more! :D Chazzy make Mikey feel better??? :P

grr evil!! lol but i love this story and I LOVE how long the chapters are! heh the whole story is awesome! well update soon please?!

update soon pleaze!!!!!!!

sorry it took me so long to review, but here i am.

another great chapter. you really threw us for a loop with the car accident and then mike waking up all tied up and stuff. i had it in my head that it was just gonna be a typical kidnapping, with mark taking mike somewhere and fucking him senseless, but you definitely took a more creative route.

especially with mike plunging a fucking axe into mark's face! hellzzz yeah! that was definitely something i'd never read before and an awesome way for mike to kill the fucker that hurt him so much. i'm thinking that mike might be a little messed up from the whole thing though. i mean, he DID have feelings for the guy, so maybe he'll be a little traumatized from killing him so brutally? but chester can make him forget about all that, which only means one thing: bring on the m/c, baby!

Oh wow! That chapter was wonderful!!! Excellent!! Great!! Fantastic!! I love the long chapters.. so keep 'em long! ^.^ I can't wait until the next chapter!!!! ^.^ GREAT JOB!! FUCKING AWESOME!

awww. That was too sweet. I loved it. :D

awsome! i'm so glad he's dead :D *jumps of joy* :D can't wait to read the next chapt :)

*cries* omg, i love it, its so good! and im so glad mark's dead :D and the axe.. well, that was a stroke of genius!

more chapters!!! xxx

I really liked it.. Your way of writting, I could almost imagine in my mind of what was happening and I could follow along very well.. I loved it! great work