wow, this is the mike angstiest chapter i've read in a long time, hehe. another well-written and graphic rape scene, although what i loved even MORE was the aftermath of it - mike lying on the floor, unable to get up, then struggling to get dressed and go pass out in the other room. and then cowering in a corner whenever he hears people coming. it was brilliant, i loved it.

also, mike's interactions with brad were great. how he coaxed mike into telling him what was going on and then how the other guys found out and all vowed to protect mike. this is the kinda stuff i like to see in park slash.

i ALSO really like the ending. the whole "kidnapped at gunpoint thing" was very movie-ish, and i liked it a lot. just be glad you didn't end it with mike kneeing the guy in the crotch, stealing his gun, and shooting him, like *someone* else did in her story (ahem *points at self*). a couple people didn't take to kindly to that kind of ending, lol.

good chapter. as i mentioned before, i LOVE your long chapters AND fast updates!

p.s. i was listening to grey daze while reading this, and it REALLY added to the drama/angst of the story. just thought i'd let ya know. peace!

*GASPS* someone needs to give Mark a good old southern ass kickin....And them Mike and Chester can declare their undying love for one another...Please update soon!

whoa! geez *shake you* are you crazy O.O you're chapter are NEVER ever too long! O.o ... i love long chapter! :) lol.... and now let's kick Mark ass..... *jumps on him*

oh mark is so evil! i love the story though! update soon!!!

My poor mikey, chaz just has to save him he has to. Awesome story, I luv it. Update soon please!!!

damn mark and his stupid gun >_<

and no.. the chapters aren't too long......long chappys=good lol

i really really like his story...so update soon!

DIE MARK DIE!!!!

nuff said...

*kicks mark* arg! i hate him with passion! .... *hugs mike and chester * ;) wink wink

hey, its coming along great! cant wait til chapter 3! this one was really good tho :)

Awwww yesh he can do that! Chazzy will SAVE HIM from eeeevil Mark!!! *slaps Mark* *locks Mikey and Chazzy in a room together* *calls through door, "YOU AREN'T COMING OUT UNTIL YOU'VE FUUUUCKED!"

*shnuggles you* Great story. MORE.

mooooooreeeee....soon, pleeeaaase ????

Poor mike, chester just has to save him from mark. Great story, I luv it. Update soon please!!!

omg omg omg oh no

i hate mark lol

this is really good though... and i wanna see what happens so update soon!!

oh yeah, btw.. i love how your chapters are long lol just thought i'd throw that in there =p

NOO dont leave it like that... come on..one more chapter tonite? pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

update soon

This was a very good chapter, along woth a very fast update, and I agree with dark_red that is was very long. Long chapters are good. Can't wait to see more of this, but I just had a brain-melt-down while working on TWO of my own stories at the same time, so I'm pretty much fried. Hope that the next update will be as quick as this... if you can, for I know it'll be good. ^___^

P.S.

You don't have to apologise to me, especially not infinity. After all, I can't claim the idea first, but yours is still better than mine, in my opinion. Glad that you decided to read mine anyway though, and thanks for the rview. ^___^

ooo, fast update ya did there, me likes it. :)

another good chapter. i like how you're taking your time to develop everything - the abuse, chester's feelings of depression and jealousy, mike's feelings of...angst, lol. as much as we all want you to just delve into the m/c slash, i'd much rather have a developed plot first. so props on that.

good rape scene too, the "fuck him up against the wall and leave him" thing was good and brutal. you should do another one like that where mark rapes mike and he ends up falling asleep on the floor because he's in too much pain to move. that's angsty as hell, hehe.

sorry, i'm in a mike angst mood. then again, when am i not? :) good job, update soon, i'll be waitin'!

p.s. i also *love* how your chapters are so long. :)

Oh Shidookey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Lordy, you've got to get rid of this Mark asshole and get on w/ the M/C loving...teehee Please update!

*gasp* yay! chazzy and mikey finally confess their love! damn that mark... grrr

yea, so anyway, nice fic, love it! now, get to the slash! *big stupid grin*

jk. update soon, please!

hey i really like this story!!! you have got to update now now now!!!! LOL ok well i will be waiting..ok...

woa that was awesome...i really enjoyed this story..poor mikey... stupid mark he cant hurt mike... i'll soo kick his ass if he does anything to chaz...update!!!!!!!!!11