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Divided We Fall by Kirstie
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From: Samy
Date: 2015-06-20
Chapter: 36
Thank you for updating! and well written chapter, as always :D and I sincerely hope this site doesn't close down, if it takes a donation to keep it running i will do so with no doubt in my mind, i love this site, and thank you once again for not forgetting this emotional story, xoxo -Sam
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2015-06-19
Chapter: 36
Thanks for the update!
I never lose hope to read a new chapter.
I'm glad Chester is back home but I am afraid that he isn't still good and I'm worried.
I loved it when Chester said bullshit on the phone next to the catatonic guy! Very funny!
I really liked that Mike wants to be the partner of Chester .... so Mike grew. Their dialogue was very moving.
I hate Chester 's dad! You asshole! He can't love his son, he should learn from Dan and Niki. I very loved them when they choose to believe in Chester and his mysterious encounter ......is Chester again in danger ?? No, please!
Great chapter !! Full of emotion, thanks !!
I have no definite news but it seems that the site is paid until 2016. I hope so!
How many chapters there will still be?
A hug !!
From: nachteule
Date: 2015-03-30
Chapter: 35
Ahhh, I was so excited to see this updated! As much as I love this story and it makes me crazy waiting for updates sometimes, if that's the amount of time you need to create work as awesome as your chapters always are, then take all the time you need :)
I'm so very proud of Chester after this chapter. I know that once he's back in hospital he may change his mind and think he's made an awful mistake, I think it's the right place for him to be at the moment. I was so scared that he was going to pull the trigger, but it was sweet that he thought about how it would affect Mike and his family and backed out. I loved how he called for Dan straight away as well. It shows A LOT for how far he's come, and how much he trusts his family.
I still don't like Peter much, but I have to saw he's definitely improved a lot since the first story. I like his new girlfriend, though I feel a little sorry for her. I have stepkids myself and know how hard it is to create a bond with them, and I can only imagine how hard it must be for her to connect with Chester after all he went through with Eve.
So what's up with Ryan, hmm? Is he really sneaking around trying to get at Chester, or was it just Chester's paranoia? I know that Chester's not in the best way, but it wouldn't surprise me for Ryan to be trying to weasel his way back in. I fucking hated him.
So all in all, brilliant chapter. As though it was going to be anything less. I'll be waiting patiently for the next one :) xx
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2015-03-27
Chapter: 35
Thanks for the update! thanks for continuing this story!
I had hoped that Chester started to feel good instead he's getting worse.
I didn't expect that he would fall in total paranoia and thought about suicide. I know it is a step forward that he has talked about it and decided to get help but I almost cried for him.
I wonder if he will ever have peace.
Thanks, I love this story.
From: wz
Date: 2015-03-23
Chapter: 35
Amazing story, I really love it and keep reading the chapters even though they're distanced in time. I think you have an awesome writing style and the emotions you put into it are very strong. Great job!
From: Samy
Date: 2015-03-22
Chapter: 35
Wow. Just wow. The amount of emotions I felt throughout this chapter was overwhelming. At some points I realized I completely stopped breathing, because the suspense you build up in your writting is done so well and in other parts of the chapter I felt as if I was paranoid or Ryan was right there waiting for me at my doorstep. Brilliant writing, original, and always the best! :) thank you.
From: Darlene
Date: 2015-03-21
Chapter: 35
It's so great to see that you are updating! I mean, i havent even reached to this chapter but just see that youre updating feels so great! High School Divide and Divided We fall are my favorite lpfanfics so far, you had made me cry and laugh so hard, i cant find the words to explain how pleased i am ! thank you for keeping on it! Hope theres another chapter up soon ! <3
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2014-12-18
Chapter: 34
cried so hard when I read this chapter. I felt like I could understand how painful and confused Mike was. Because i am at where he was right now. I always think High School Divided series is the greatest stories in this website. It's not only about love but also friendship, responsibility, confusion, dream and everything about life. I cried twice before for this story. One was when Chester's father met his teacher and Chester felt himself so small, his pride was cracking in pieces. The second time was when Chester blamed himself on brad's death in hospital. I cried for those scenes because they both made me recall some part of my own. I never thought a bennoda story could give me so much feels like that. It's probably the power of resonance.
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2014-12-08
Chapter: 34
Awwwwww you have absolutely no idea how happy this update made me! I was so excited to sit down and read it, and believe me it did not disappoint! So much happened, I don't even know where to begin, but I'm so glad all of them are healing and moving in a positive direction. I was so worried about Chester after that cliffhanger, but all things considered, I think he was pretty lucky to escape with only bruises and a small fracture. It broke my heart that no one would believe it was an accident, and especially his words about how if he wanted to commit suicide he'd do a better job than that. I can tell that even though he is recovering, he still has some dark thoughts hovering around him.
It made me really happy that they all made up with Sam and Dave, I've been waiting for that for so long, I knew they couldn't stay mad forever. I mean, just look at how sweet Chester is, who could stay angry at him? I think it was also good for Chester to be able to help Mike, instead of it always being the other way around. Poor Mike, I can feel his helplessness, and I just wanna hug him and say everything will be okay. I think Chester and Dan were right, in the midst of Chester's recovery everyone kind of forgot about Mike's problems, even Mike himself.
In the end I think it was a good choice for Mike to stay close to home, and I don't think it would've happened without Chester supporting him. When Mike and Dan went to the college, that was maybe my favorite part of the chapter. It's so heartbreaking to hear how distraught Mike is over Brad's death, even blaming himself in some ways. He needed to let it out though, and maybe now after seeing the memorial and attending the college he'll be able to start moving on.
This was another incredible chapter, thank you so much for continuing to update this story. Really looking forward to the next update!
From: Samy
Date: 2014-12-05
Chapter: 34
I AM SO FUCKING HAPPY LIKE Damn I'm in loss of words that has been one of the most smooth going chapters in a while because after that cliffhanger I was preparing for the worst and you just never know with this story, which is one of the best things about it. And man I think a tear fell out of my eye at the end you know everything is going so well ugh omg perfect chapter, worth the wait, I love your writing to no end, yeah I think you figured that out already<3 and also thank you for taking the time out of your day to write this story. -love sam
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2014-12-04
Chapter: 34
A new chapter! You make me so happy! I was awake until 2 AM to read.
I have loved this chapter. Perfect, magnificent.
Finally Chester is better and he helps Mike now. What a surprise.
Eventually Mike needs his fragile boyfriend and his parents.
I hope with all my heart that they can be happy, they deserve a good life. Please!
Thank you for not abandoning this story, thank you! It means a lot to me. Thank you so much!
You're a great writer.
Happy Christmas and New Year!
Paula
From: xxxNicolexxx
Date: 2014-12-03
Chapter: 34
Your story never fails me. I mean NEVER.
Such a great chapter exploring the psyche of Chester and Mike, especially Mike!
Just the usual, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU!
From: Samy
Date: 2014-11-17
Chapter: 33
I'm honestly scared shitless for what's to come, but I can never get enough of this story and yeah I think you figured that out already please update ;-;
From: hattu
Date: 2014-08-11
Chapter: 33
I hate cliffhangers with a passion!
Finally I was able to read the last to chapters and then you stop with this...Are you trying to murder your readers ;) ??
I was so glad about the updates, because I just plainly adore your writing. You have a way with words. You make your characters come to life and as a reader you literally can feel every emotion they are going through. It always amazes me!
You like to torture Chester? Since the first Chapter I had the feeling he is not gonna make it out alive...Eventhough I would love to finally see him happy. You put him on a good way...a chenge of thoughts...and then....mymy I hope for him to get better :)
Can“t wait to see you update again!
hattu
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2014-07-29
Chapter: 33
I was so happy to see your update, I'm sure I've said this already but this + High School Divide is my favorite fanfic ever. So I couldn't wait to sit down and read the long chapter! Poor Ches, I wish he didn't feel like he has to "prove" himself all the time by going off his meds. I guess going off the Zoloft was working so far, but he still worries me. I love his and Mike's relationship, it has ups and downs, and they fight, and they're far from the perfect couple. But they love each other so much, it's beautiful. They make it through so much they deserve to have some happiness. I was really proud of Chester for all he accomplished in this chapter. He got a job, went out and got accustomed to dealing with new people/environments, he began writing and drawing again, he talked to Sean and got another job offer, he solidified his relationship with Mike, and he talked to his dad. But the end, wow the end really shocked me. I couldn't believe Mike reacted so strongly and negatively, I know he's a bit paranoid, but it made me angry that no one would even listen to Chester, when really that moment was a huge victory for him. It's so discouraging, I could feel his confusion and disappointment with his family. Surprisingly, Dan was the only one who seemed to listen at all. And then out of nowhere, the car crash....oh my god, what a cliffhanger! Amazing chapter, and is hope you'll update soon, I gotta know if Ches is okay!
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2014-07-27
Chapter: 33
I WAS SURPRISED BY YOUR UPDATE. THIS IS THE BEST THING HAPPENED IN THIS MONTH. it's good to know you are still on this story. That means a lot to me.
I can understand Chester and his family. My sister took some medicine probably like Zoloft before. It's really a hard time for both of us. She was always sitting somewhere like a doll without emotion. We felt worried about her and she felt sick of the medicine. But it was the only way could make her stop being paranoid. She kept taking it for about 2 months then stopped it since we had lots of discussions with her doctor about the side effect. I hope Chester would have a talk with doctor about this problem in later. Plus, I think Chester was doing well without Zoloft so far, unlike when he stopped Sub...
I have to Im so happy for Chester doing good at his first job since he was back. I felt worried about him when one of girls asked him about Brad. But he made control of himself and made it through eventually though kind of hardly. It's a big step for him for backing to normal life.
To be honest, I dont understand why Mike acted like that. I can see he was really nervous and afraid of Chester getting closer to any drug. But why didn't he listen to Chester's explanation? Probably, like what Chester thought, there was something more than about him?
Anyway, I feel so glad for Chester. He was getting better. Sean even offered him a job in this chapter. That's awesome. More importantly, Chester was proud of himself. I think it means a lot for him.
In the end, you left us a cliff. Chester had a car accident? oh god...poor Chester, i hope it would not make any change because everything was just getting better.
From: Wake0916
Date: 2014-07-27
Chapter: 33
This was amazing!! I can't tell you how happy I'm with Chester's recovery that it's just smile worthy. It does annoy me though that everyone else is against him and doesn't want to believe in him. I'm so mad at Mike for what he did. I sometimes feel like he blames his problems and not being able to move on with his life because of Chester. It sucks when the person you love most doesn't believe in you. I'm glad Chester's dad is doing well too. It's good to see he is getting his life together. I'm hoping Chester gets out of this accident ok. If I was him I would still be hurt about the Shinoda's not trusting me. Update soon please!!! Can't wait till see what happens.
From: Samy
Date: 2014-07-26
Chapter: 33
Amazing chapter I think Chester's feelings were well written and so is everyone's in this fic obviously, and i mean while I was reading this chapt I just felt so much hope for chester like damnit man when I read the ending I was SHITTTT again man this guy and his luck, but he has to make it I mean he's been through so much shit man oh man please update as soon as possible this is kind of a maJOR cliffhanger, But nevertheless reading this chapter for me was so refreshing okay like chester being proud of himself and stuff, and i hope mike gets his stuff together. And Chester to never ever give up man I need him to stay with those positive feelings I swear I'm so happy like this could've turned out worse and that would kill me lol not really okay enough rambling. GREAT CHAPTER 5/5
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2014-07-26
Chapter: 33
Wonderful chapter! I'm staying out of breath with this rollerl coaster of emotions.
It scares me the fragility of Chez: the temptation to lie, not to tell the truth, not to disappoint anyone, these are the problems that he has.
Mike ......... he is very much mistaken. I do not understand what he thinks, he's afraid?
The final ............. please update soon and please ............ enough incidents to Chez!
Incredible!
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From: wz
Date: 2015-06-26
Chapter: 36
Hello there, the site is apparently still active until next summer and the owner seems to be willing to still pay the whole thing until it's possible so there's no risk for this to end unless the hosts decides otherwise, but it won't happen. Hopefully. Thank you for updating, you gave me something good and emotional to read tonight!