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Divided We Fall by Kirstie
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From: Alnila
Date: 2011-02-23
Chapter: 27
I've been checking since July if there's another chapter. Are you going to continue? I really have no idea what will happen, and the curiosity is killing me :) I'm sure I'm not the only one :)
From: swsrd
Date: 2010-07-28
Chapter: 27
Are they still in a relationship? Are they really care about each other any more? When I saw Nicky to report the miss of Chaz calliing him"our foster son", I thought I had tears in my eyes, I told myself that Chaz still be loved by Mike's family, that family once seemed like his own and only home.
Yeah, but, where are you, Mike? You wanna act cool, you thought you are sensible? When the one you loved needs you most, but you are not there, you're losing him little by little along the way. When you completely lose him, don't blame anyone, and don't hate love, unless you've already wanna pull yourself out of his life.
If it's good for both of them to be apart, I'd like to accept this truth, though I hate this to happen, but I haven't seen neither of them better or happier. So this is really feeling twisted, i'm so worried about how they will develop their relationship and where they will go.
Awesome like always, waiting for your next update.
From: hattu
Date: 2010-07-28
Chapter: 27
I am so glad you updated!
Please don´t let this story die!
I would say also please don´t let chester die, but I am afraid I would fight a lost cause here. That doesn´t look to good for him. I hope someone of his friends find him soon!
It is always a pleasure to read an update from you! i can´t explain how your writing always gets me. I always get so sucked into the world/ characters your describing that I really have the feeling to be there. I admire your way to express feelings with words! keep it up please!
Greetz hattu
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2010-07-27
Chapter: 27
I'm so glad you update it, but oh noooo, seems Chester was in a really horrible stiuation. Dont push him so far next chap, please. He needs Mike , and MIke,what is he doing?
From: PaperWulf
Date: 2010-07-26
Chapter: 27
OMG... plz update soon! High School Divide was one of my favorite lp stories of all time. I've only recently come back and I can't wait to read more of this story. You know you're a great author when you make a person cry!!
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2010-07-23
Chapter: 27
O.M.G! this story update!! i almost cant believe my eyes LOL i LOVE it all the time!
and awww my heart feel so hurt when i read everything about chaz by now, thats so hopeless, and he just passive now, this so bad, really, and sad.
i hope they can help him back to the better way to live, but mike will still love him after these spoilage? im worried about this. tho i really hope that them two will get back together. awwww ><
this is a AMAZING chap, and im looking forward to read more. LOVE it so much! :D
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2010-07-22
Chapter: 27
:( I feel so bad for Chester, is life is really horrible right now! I hope they can help him out
From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl
Date: 2010-07-22
Chapter: 27
OMG U ACTUALLY UPDATED OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *dies*
From: meteora500
Date: 2010-07-05
Chapter: 26
Oh dear, I really wish I could read more! I'm really hoping you decide to update soon...
From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl
Date: 2010-03-26
Chapter: 26
i simply CANNOT w8 for an update,this is seriously one of the best stories ive ever read,and im not talking only about fan fics!!!!!!!!!!
From: kissmypixels
Date: 2009-09-17
Chapter: 26
Damn...I absolutly LOVED High School Divide & thought a sequel would be nowhere as good as your original story, simply cuz HSD was so amazing. But wow, I'm so impressed by this sequel! I've read all 27 chapters within 2 days cuz I couldn't stop reading.
Your writing has improved considerably - I instantly saw an improvement from HSD. Your spelling/punctuation/general flow of things is much better.
Not only that but you've developed your characters so much. More than in any other story I've read on lpfiction. My heart aches everytime I read about Chester though...his down fall really hit me hard cuz I went through something similar. You've totally captured the essence of addiction and the effects that it comes with, in such a way that I've been reduced to tears on some chapters :(
I just hope that Ches & Mike will get back together somehow, and that Chester doesn't end up dead. Ohhhh man I would be crying for weeks if that's how your story ended lmao. =/
I look forward to seeing more updates from you. This story really is great - this and HSD are the best fanfics I've ever read. Honestly!
From: Dre
Date: 2009-08-17
Chapter: 26
chapter 27 was amazing. really loved all the descriptions your wrote in there, and the plot is getting really nice. good job on this one =)
From: Dj
Date: 2009-07-27
Chapter: 26
I know I never comment or anything, but you are killing me here. I need this updated every second, okay?! :D Your writing has greatly improved since the first chapter of High School Divide, but I still love re-reading the whole thing. Can't wait for more!
From: swsrd
Date: 2009-07-26
Chapter: 26
I was listening to 10 Years' song 'So Long, Good-bye' when I read this:"Chester stared before breaking down into body wracking sobs. Mike had forgotten him, he was no longer waiting for him to call, no longer worried about him. He’d moved on... probably found someone else. " And I felt a tear just run down my cheek freely..
OMG, shame on me, I'm such a little girl..OH NO!!
6 years..lots good memories here but I still wait for your next update.~~Love this, really.
From: pinkwater3
Date: 2009-07-25
Chapter: 26
Happy 6 years!
I've been following this story for so long and I'm still so excited every time you post a new chapter. I love this story to pieces, I really do.
I love how you don't just say "And then Chester did drugs." You really go in depth with the effects the drugs have on him, and how he feels. A few times I found myself thinking (and hoping!) that he finally came to his senses and realized that this lifestyle is bad for him. But everytime he's close to quit, the apetite for drugs is so much stronger and it comes back to where it began. Throughout this whole chapter, I've been secretly wishing Chester would do something that would result in him going to hospital to finally get some help. And when he started cutting himself, I was like OH FINALLY!
Fat Derek and his greasy face made me wanna puke. It's sad to see that Chester could do just about anything for drugs at this point.
I also want to smack Mike for turning his cellphone off. Who does that? Pffft
Overall, this was another great chapter! :D
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2009-07-25
Chapter: 26
arghh Chester I so want to kick his ass right now >.< he's such a jackass! XD
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-07-25
Chapter: 26
Happy you update! >.< my happy day~ XD
Oh...Chaz, he is so stupid, sad feeling around him. the status of Mike dont care about him anymore in his eyes must made him really really angst and helpless, think about he need be loved but...i dont know, he feel bad but don't let people to help him. he can't fall more than now, the last line of this chapter almost made me cry.
And I wonder What about Mike, where is he and what is he doing, will he save Chaz from this deep trouble? I hope he will! I hope they stay with each other and happy again!
Whoa, this story is 6 years old, thats a long time >.<
I love this story soooo much! its always the best at here!
Great chapter as usual! and I'm waiting for your update! :D
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2009-07-25
Chapter: 26
That was more stupid things Chester did, what's pity. what was Mike doing? where was he? I wonder if once he know the situation Chester got in what his reaction will be.
From: KingMichael
Date: 2009-07-25
Chapter: 26
so happy u update!and please keep it up please~!I wana see what will happen...this chapter is wonderful,though chaz seem to get worse...anyway,I love u story!
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From: Karine
Date: 2012-08-08
Chapter: 27
so i just finished it and i really hope you'll update it sometime soon. i wanna know what happens next so much i really really am hoping Chaz will be okay and they'll find him and take him away of the little fucker that is Ryan. please don't let Chaz in his hands for much longer ç.ç