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Divided We Fall by Kirstie
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From: Samy
Date: 2014-06-26
Chapter: 32
God recovery for Chaz is going to be hard and at this point I really do hope for the best in his future because he deserves it after so much man fuck this guy needs a chance (gonna go cry now) this chapter was written excellently as always and I'm crossing my fingers here for Chaz
From: Samy
Date: 2014-06-26
Chapter: 32
God recovery for Chaz is going to be hard and at this point I really do hope for the best in his future because he deserves it after so much man fuck this guy needs a chance (gonna go cry now)
From: Samy
Date: 2014-06-26
Chapter: 32
God recovery for Chaz is going to be hard and at this point I really do hope for the ute vex best for his future because he deserves it after so much man fuck this guy needs a chance (gonna go cry now)
From: lp lover
Date: 2014-06-07
Chapter: 32
I started reading this years ago, before I started college back in 2006. There was a while where I would check back for updates, but after a while of none I forgot about it. Yesterday, out of nowhere (and years of not reading LP fics) I thought of this story and I looked it up. I SQUEALED when I saw it was back to being updated.
Chester's continuing battle with addiction is heartbreaking, and I truly sympathised with Mike when he broke up with Chester. I was in a relationship with someone who had alcohol dependency problems, and when people expects you to be a saviour, it's hard. I was stunned by Brad's death, and I was hoping that it was a lie to get Chester out of hiding. Is it weird that I hope he'll somehow come back? Chester's recovery is heartbreaking and I just hope that he'll get through it.
I love this story so much, your writing is amazing and I can't wait to read more.
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2014-03-09
Chapter: 32
I cried several times when i read this chapter. I understood what Chester was thinking and felt so glad his that friends and family was always around him and supported him. The road of recovery is going to be so long and tough like a bitch, both in physically and mentally. I really hope this time would be the last time Chester doubted his family and friends and gave up himself.
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2014-03-08
Chapter: 32
Ive been waiting for an update on this! Awesome chapter, Chester was doing so good, but he tried to push himself too far and too soon :/ I'm glad everyone has stuck by him (except for Sam and Dave, what's up with them?) but he has to stay away from those cravings...keep your eyes on the goal, Chester, you can do it...
Mike is so amazing for sticking with him, although he's a little pushy sometimes. I feel like maybe part of why Chester wanted to lower his dosage is because Mike was a bit pushy about the sex? Either way, I hope they both learn more and more how to understand and be there for each other.
I loved this chapter, I was so excited to see an update from you! Great job, I'll be looking forward to the next one!
From: nachteule
Date: 2014-03-08
Chapter: 32
This was wonderful, as always. I was so worried when Chester did that coke, I thought he was going to fall right back into it all again. He was doing so well, and then screwed it up :( I understand why they were all so mad at him, but I'm glad he could eventually explain himself and they understood to a point. I'm also proud of Chester for his suggestion to tell Mike something he thought every day as a way to gain his trust, and I think Rob going to see the doctor with him will really help their relationship too.
On a side note, Rob cracks me up. I love how he can lighten the mood in any situation. He's definitely been the much needed comic relief in some chapters, and really seems to be the rock that everyone leans on and trusts to make everything seem better; at least temporarily.
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2014-03-07
Chapter: 32
I've waited so long for this chapter. Thank you, it's very long and exciting, full of pain.
Chez is an idiot, full of fears and insecurities, I was really scared that he would die. This time I thought it would all be over, I almost cried.
Your writing always excites me, thank you very much!
I always hope that there will be a happy ending.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Paula
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2013-12-01
Chapter: 31
I dont know how to describe my feeling when I saw the story appearing on the first page. Screaming in my mind "you gotta be kidding me!" I thought I would have been waiting several years for the new chapter after you last update. It is the best Thanksgiving gift I get. THANK YOU! And also thanks for you letting Chester and Mike together again. I really love Nicky and Dan. They were the best parents in this world. Chester was so lucky to live with them.
From: Meg Louise
Date: 2013-12-01
Chapter: 31
I WAS WAITING FOR THIS TO BE UPDATED!
Honestly you're such an amazing writer, I loved High School Divide and this sequel is equally as amazing! I'm so happy you updated and with that long chapter! Chester has came so far from the first story, telling Dan about Ryan before anyone else! I
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2013-12-01
Chapter: 31
Fantastic! Just great!
I know that you have a personal life so it don't matter if I have to wait for your update, I am always here.
A chapter long and full of emotions. I love so much Niki and Dan, they are wonderful parents. I'm glad that Mike and Chez begin to rebuild their relationship.
I read the scene of making love twice! Superb!
You are very good, your story is special!
Paula
From: nachteule
Date: 2013-11-30
Chapter: 31
There's more!! I thought that the last chapter was the end since I found this story so late, but yay! This and HSD are without a doubt my favourite fanfics ever and I'm so glad there's more to come. I absolutely love how you portray your character's personalities and emotions and I love that it's realistic, things aren't always happily ever after, some things take work.
I'm so proud of Chester opening up to Dan like that, especially after they had their difficulties connecting, it says a lot for how much he's grown up as well as how much Dan has come to love him and think of him as his son. Sam and Dave are a bit disappointing, though I get where they're coming from in a way. They have a family now and their little boy and his safety need to come first. Again, it adds to the realism and shows yet again what an awesome writer you are. I do hope that he can work things out with Sam at least, coz she was such a great friend to him.
Can I also just quickly say how much I hate Ryan, and that bloody hell Mike is a horn bag :P
Anyway, I'm so glad there's more to come, and I so look forward to reading the rest. You are honestly an inspiration and you've shown me what it takes to make an awesome story that people can really get right into and get hooked on, coz I know I am. I've read HSD and up to chapter 31of this twice now :)
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2013-11-29
Chapter: 31
I just found your stories a few weeks ago, but I've already read all of High School Divide and Divided We Fall. It is seriously one of the best stories I've read on here so far. I love all the drama and detail you put into it.
One of my favorite parts was the chapters when Chester was living on the street when he was 15, the thoughts and feelings come through so well in the whole story though.
I love how you took him even lower in the sequel, but still he's trying to come back now and Mike, Nicky, and Dan are still supporting him. Your characters have amazing strength and depth to them, I love everything about this story.
You're an amazing writer, 10 years on one story is a lot of dedication, congrats on that, I've really enjoyed reading this!
From: nachteule
Date: 2013-10-31
Chapter: 30
Added to faves just like High School Divide. Awesome sequel and conclusion, Chester really went downhill this time, huh? I didn't think he was gonna pull through for a while there, when his days were just blurred together and he had no clue what was happening. It shows that you really did your research on dofferent drugs, addiction and depression, and it's really paid off. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Awesome work :)
From: Samy
Date: 2013-09-09
Chapter: 30
please please update i cant wait to read about what happens next
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2013-07-26
Chapter: 30
I had a stomachache this morning but after read your update, I felt nothing about it anymore. Only I could feel it that happiness fulled with my stomach. Though there was some anxious in Chester, he would get through them by himself and by the love his family and friends gave him. I was so glad when Mike decided to visit Chester and Chester reacted what he did. Nicky was right, if someone could save Chester, that would be Mike.
Ten years, no doubt that you are my favorite author here. Thanks for you still stick in here and continue this beautiful story. You gave me a lot of memery this years. I still remember when I first read your high school divide, I was only 16. I cried seriously for the fiction because I saw a part of me in Chester's life. And now I am 24, I change a lot like Chester was the old one anymore in this fic. I, as a reader witness the growth of every characters in the story, at the same time I's been growing up with them. That was fantastic. Thank you, I really want to say that to you
From: Karine
Date: 2013-07-26
Chapter: 30
ohmygod i was like ready for bad things to happen. i had totally given up on chester and was expecting a lot of pain but this chapter came and slapped me in the face !!!!!!
oh it's been so long that they're hurting, it's /so good/ to see them all okay (´;ω;`)
i feel chaz struggling and i'm afraid he'll fall back on old habits but he's still fighting to be good so omg idk
and congrats on the 10th anniversary!! thank you so much for not giving up on the story!!
From: rhooben
Date: 2013-07-26
Chapter: 30
Already 10 years.. Geez.. Not making me younger.
High School Divide was one of my first story I've read here. I loved it.. every single words, letter i loved it.
When you started the sequel I was thrilled.. then I've left beside this fandom for a bit.. I left beside the whole LP universe for a bit.. a huge bit.. almost 6 years..
I'm glad I've found you back here.. and this story damn I love those characters. Let's talk about this chapter..
I'm glad Chester is reacting to Mike. If Mike couldn't reach him nobody could I guess. They have a special connexion together. It's cool Chaz is coming back home. That's gonna be hard, Dan won't give him a simple life at all.. and I think Chester knew that already. He has to gain their trust back.
“I’m too tired to start on the hundred tonight.”.. Oh geez you cracked me up with this one. I love the silliness of the boys, especially the akward sexual moment in the middle of everyone.
I hope eveything will be alright and Chester will not have major problems like for example.. meet Ryan..
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From: jaybee
Date: 2014-07-10
Chapter: 32
It has been ages since I have been on here thanks to my stupid antivirus deciding this site wasn't safe :( I finally get on and find I had missed some of your updates and was gutted, but I have finally caught up again. This really is a truly brilliant work of fiction and I will be holding my breath until you update again which will hopefully be soon or you and Linkin park will have a dead fan lol