I have so much love for this chapter, I'm not really sure where to start, but I shall try and make this as ramble-free as possible =D

One of the many things I really enjoy about this story is how you don't just stick to say, Chester's p.o.v, but you manage to switch (and without confusing too /jealous!) to other characters. This is really good because it adds so much depth to the story - we're not just hearing how Chester is feeling - even though he's the main character and the centre of all the turmoil. And this is great to me because it proves how something like this can affect so many people and also, it makes for a great read.

I really enjoyed this chapter and how it concentrated on Mike. One thing I picked up on is how Mike seems to want to try and move on from Chester - but who is he kidding? Wherever he looks he is reminded of him. A part of me wants to go 'good for mike - he SHOULD try and move on, because frankly, Chester is treating him like a piece of shit' but then another part of me wants Mike to go back home (like Nicky) and drag Chester away from Ryan - for Mike to rescue him. The thing is, how can you rescue someone who just pushes you away time and time again, who lies to you and cheats on you and tries to drag you down? And I think that Mike has this huge conflict going on - so although the twist at the end where he went to try the cocaine shocked me at first, when I read it through again, I thought about it and how it's no wonder he was pushed to that point. It's a wonder he's not had a full on breakdown.

Rob is love. I feel sorry for him a bit as he is seeing Mike struggle and feels he can't do anything about - which is a little how Mike was/is with Chester - trying to do anything to keep them happy. His reaction to Mike almost trying the drugs was pretty intense and once again, it just goes to show how Chester's behavior is affecting every one of them.

Doug, I have to say hooray to Doug for saving the day. Even though I'm all for a happy c/m ending - doug is special. I think he should be there for Mike more often. Naked too. Oh dear, I'm rambling. And probably, I've missed a lot out but you know I love this story so much and I'm on the edge here waiting for what you have next because I have absoloutly no idea =D

Thx for the cookies, the icing is especially more-ish (:

When I saw Mike burst into tears after hung up Nicky’s call, I realized his pressure and sadness. Buried deep and showed emotionlessly. That’s so real.

Strangely, now I want them to be apart, yeah, maybe, the difference between them is too great to hide.

Though I didn’t know what Chester thought about but at some point I could understand him too.

“Divided we fall”…hmmm, I guess I get some clue of the meaning.

Anyway, great chapter as always. Wait to see where they will go.

Update soon, thank you.~~

YAY, you update! XD I'm so happy awww~~

Really AMAZING chapter! these guys life, so real, can touch my heart every time. they are living in very different kind life, Chaz and Mike, maybe this just my illusion, but I feel like cuz these mess, these confused trouble, the two hearts of this couple just rode away every day, they should fall in love with each other anew. no idea how its going, just expect maybe there will have some good change when Mike bcak home in some weekend.

And I like Rob and his girlfriend at here, and the Doug, they are all really good friend. very different from those guys around Chaz. maybe I should say Mike is lucky in this way.

Whatever, waiting for the next chapter! And always love Angst Chester things~ :D

Gorgeous work!

Awesome chapter yet again, I really love this story and i cant wait for your next update. By the way what you doing in Portsmouth? lol

awesome chapter! But I do believe it is the "Mann Chinese" theater, not the "Chinese Mann" theater. It's not that big of I deal I have a slip of tongue whenever I say that theaters name too *giggle* but I do live near Hollywood and I've been there before so..yeah

Anyways, wonderful to see another chapter from you! I LOVED IT! :D

omg i was jumping up n down when i saw that u updated....lol good job keep it up!!! ;)

I know Mike's got his life to live, but come on, what about Chester? What about that intervention he was going to have? Ugh, Mike maddens me in his story sometimes- and if gets together with someone else I think I'll officially dislike him. And wow, to state the obvious, Chester's a mess. Love this fic, sorry I don't review it enough, but I'm always reading and waiting for the next chapter- pretty much the only reason I check this site nowadays. Thanks for the update:)

this and high school divide are two of the best stories in this site....plz plz plz plzzzzzz update sooon!!!

o please..please please please please please please pleeeeease continue this story!!!!!it's so addictive..I'm totally addicted!!your writing is just brilliant!I love the care you put in the description of your character's feelings and in some little details..oh and also the fact that you go so 'slow'..I mean..your story doesn't have big gaps..is like live with them!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!PLEASE!! ^^

I can't imagine where this story will go. I really don't konw, but I just can't get enough of these.

Slowly, dramatically, so real.

Sorry if I couldn't leave you a good review, cuz there are too much thoughts in my mind. I love this one wherever you make it go.

I loved this chapter to pieces. I think it really worked so well how you took the focus off of Chester by focusing more on Dave/Sam/The Baby and Brad/Serj - but what I also liked was how Chester was more than there throughout the chapter.

Chester is sunk so low that he probably has no real clue about how his behavior is affecting those who love and care about him. His characteristics lack any form of selfishness - this state is only brought on by the drugs, sadly. But it strikes that he has hurt Brad a lot and also Dave, yet the three of them, especially Sam, seem so concerned about Chester's welfare - if only he could see that and just swallow his pride and let someone help. The thing is, he doesn't seem to realise he IS in a mess.

The brief mentions of Mike and Nicky also, I liked that touch. I feel so badly for Mike, especially. He's gone back to college with that pipe dream that one day Chester will follow him and they'll get their happily-ever-after. Sadly, unless Chester suddenly wakes up from what he's doing (which I doubt is gonna happen) or Mike or someone just drags him away from this mess and forces him to get help - I don't see a happy ending.

And now we're back to Chester coming round, and back to Ryan who is rotten and bad and just, everything Chester does NOT need.

I cannot wait for more hun, this is so wonderfully written. I love it (:

So happy this story update!

We can know many things through Sam and Dave's dialogue. Hope everyone is ok. and poor Chaz, Ryan just a carnal man, he doesn't love anyone, but maybe this false warm is enough for Chaz by now. Hope the one who really love him and care him will do something before too late.

Love this chapter, and wanna know what will happen. Waiting for the next~ :D

Have I ever mentioned that this is my favorite fic here? Well, aside from High School Divide..

Okay, it's official. I want to take a crowbar and beat Chester silly with it. Just shocks me how okay it is for him to cheat on Mike. :(

Hope Mikey's mom is okay...

Always glad to see an update.

*waits for more* :)

hmm very interesting chapter, I do enjoy this story a lot, it is very very good :3, you make my day whenever I see that you updated.

I love this story as much as the first one, and can't get enough of it! Update whenever you get the chance k?

Oh man I was so happy to see you updated this fabulous story! Love that Dave and Sam are having a boy. As I was reading how happy they are for their little boy, I couldn't help but think on Chester and how even before he was born his mother rejected him.

Funny that Sam can't read the signs that Brad is most likely gay and in love with Serj when she was able to see it so clearly between Mike and Chester. I have a feeling she's in for a big surprise. Speaking of Brad, I love how he hasn't given up on Chester even though he didn't want to hear what Chester said about his being gay.

And finally, poor Chester! Ryan not only shares him on a whim but doesn't even care about his well being enough to cover him with a blanket. I really hope that forced rehab is in the works before it's too late for Chester. Great job and I hope you will update soon!

should:

(New Paragraph)Sam laughed and swatted him, “It’s all important.”

be there?

I'll leave a better review when finished reading

Okay, I finally managed to master the difficult task of getting an account here >.>

I've commented in your livejournal, dunno if you noticed.

Just finished reading this part here, all in a rush, spending the day clawing at my keyboard, about to smash my laptop. Jeeez, you know the feeling of just wanting to magically jumo into a movie/story whatsoever? I swear my screen already has a hole, but I'm just too big to simply jump into it >.>

Could it get any worse? I hope not >.< the thought of Ryan and this other guy haviing theirs with chaz without protection gave me shivers somehow... wo~ hope I don't give you any ideas now (too late anyway)

Hell, I'd say YES for forced rehab, damn it >.<

okay, much written, nothing said... Love this story great deal, will be checking every five minutes for the next update!

Sue

short chapter, it was read rapidly. didn't really add up to the story i thought. it's just basically stating whatever we thought was happening with both characters.

just gotta wait for the good stuff, right?

Sorry for the late review.

Anyway, Chester ISN'T OK. Is there really nothing Mike can do?? I just doubt. Though it might not help Chester if Mike comes back and finds him, it will absolutely with NO hope to change things better if Mike just stays there and waits. They wish Chester could just go back to the right track by himself?Why?And how?Till he's tired?...Oh,I'm sorry, but I'm really, really worry about Chester and their relationship.

They shouldn't be divided.

Wait for your update.=]

If there isn´t going to be someone who gets Chester into rehab, I doubt he will come out alive from this story.

I can´t wait to see whats gonna happen!