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Divided We Fall by Kirstie
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From: hattu
Date: 2025-01-04
Chapter: 41
What a great way to start the New Year! I nearly dropped my Cup of coffee!
Love this, despite the evil cliffhanger! Oh I Hope this ambulance is just for safety!
I like to get an insight of everybodys State of mind. I know why Sam stays behind, but it would kill ne to sit home alone with the Baby.
And Phe, wow his wish is so Sweet, sadly life is rarely this nice. My heart goes out to Robbie, just want to hug him. I hope he gets a Chance to feel better.
Can‘t wait to read the missing Part where we get to know what happens in that car they are all chasing.
Cheers
Hattu
From: hattu
Date: 2024-09-28
Chapter: 39
Sorry, late to the party. But I just returned and saw that the new chapter is already a fe month old.
Took the time to reread the whole thing. I still pretty much love this. You have a beautiful way to develop your characters. They way you make them come alive in my imagination, I just love it. Can't say more.
And I do hope there might be a happy ending somewhere...but the way things are looking right now, I am not sure. I hope you surprise me ;)
Can't wait to read more, I need to know how this ends...even though when I need to wait 10 more years ;)
Gretes hattu
From: Darlene
Date: 2024-03-23
Chapter: 39
I remember reading High School Divide over 10 years ago, it was the first fanfic I ever fell in love with, I remember re-reading it so many times during the following years, it's so crazy to think that I once was younger than the protagonist, and now I'm so much older than the guys in Divided We Fall! I always wondered if you'd continue it and I never lost faith, and I swear to god, after all these years, pandemics, Chester leaving... this story still holds such a special place in my heart and it always will <3 once again thank you so much!!! and please never stop writing!!!
From: Darlene
Date: 2024-03-23
Chapter: 39
I remember reading High School Divide over 10 years ago, it was the first fanfic I ever fell in love with, I remember re-reading it so many times during the following years, it's so crazy to think that I once was younger than the protagonist, and now I'm so much older than the guys in Divided We Fall! I always wondered if you'd continue it and I never lost faith, and I swear to god, after all these years, pandemics, Chester leaving... this story still holds such a special place in my heart and it always will <3 once again thank you so much!!! and please never stop writing!!!
From: Jokercooper
Date: 2023-09-10
Chapter: 39
caramba, eu li isso quando estava no fundamental, que saudades
From: Gummibear Queen
Date: 2023-03-25
Chapter: 39
Took me a while but I finally reread it all. With the brain fog (forth time having covid) it was like a fresh story all over again.
Just saw my review from a few years ago below, can't even remember that! Anyways I agree with everything that gummibear queen also said.
It's so lovely to see you are writing again, though this is something we have spoken about privately. It's funny we both started writing at about the same time and have probably realised Meteora is turning 20 and so our our unfinished stories.
This is a time for completion, closure and hopefully just remembering not only the joys of Linkin Park at that time, their music, the places it took us and the people we met, but also the joys of writing.
We both should do more writing, our lives took us both on lovely journeys and I'm sure we are both capable some something great, you especially. You created this entire universe rich with characters and plots, and I am very happy to see this story continue and hopefully conclude.
From: Samy
Date: 2020-08-10
Chapter: 37
logged back on here to say, still one of the best stories of all time.
From: hit_n_run_me
Date: 2020-08-09
Chapter: 37
I just logged back in recently and re read this whole story, it’s still so good, I hang onto the slim chance that one day you might update it, even though I know lpfiction is very much in the past for a lot of people now.
This is just such a good solid story, from their whole can’t live with/can’t live without each other relationship to all the descriptions on Chester’s feelings on drugs and depression.
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2019-09-05
Chapter: 37
I'm going through and re-reading HSD and DWF, and I really hope this story will be finished some day. It truly is one of my favorite stories ever, fan fiction or not. <3
From: Samy
Date: 2018-03-02
Chapter: 37
Just came here to say that this will always be my favorite fanfic of all time, despite everything. I'm highly interested to see how you'll end this story....
Thank you.
From: Gummibear Queen
Date: 2017-08-30
Chapter: 37
Reviewing everything I've read/reread. Continued.
This was a hard read, especially considering everything that happened recently and the subject matter. I'm disappointed that it's unfinished but I am the first person that should be slapped for that!
This took your characters from HSD and further developed them. The story was richer, which was already amazing, and darker. The emotions were so exposed and the world you created after high school was so real and multilayered. I enjoyed reading this, hidden within the angst were gems of comedy and love, and I felt like I knew each and every character personally... Well I have been reading then for 14 years.
A review of characters:
Mike - so lost and lovable. Such a lovely boy, though I wanted to shake him and scream for fun ks sake get on with your life. He chose crack over you and is ruining every dream you have. I wanted him to be happy, find his own happiness away from the drama and be his own person. I wanted him to sleep with Doug, live with Rob and just find some normality. But, as someone who made the same mistake as Mike, I can completly understand why he couldn't do that.
Rob - I like what became of this character, going from support and only featuring late in HSD to becoming an essential person in everyone's lives...I can not believe I agreed to a break and would have been in full support of him buying a drumkit, when he finished college he can move to NYC. I love that he is everyone's go to person and is confident enough to tell them to cut the crap out.
Dave & Sam - bless them and their kind hearts.
Brad - such a change since HSD and then so tragic. I wish we'd heard his poems.
Nicky and Dan - utterly amazing. Their emotions and reactions brought pain and humour. At times I wanted them to shake Mike for me, they did become to Chester focused at the expense of Mike and I fear in future years this will come back to them.
Chester - last of the mains but too complex to describe with so many Chester's to discuss. I feel I knew him mainly through the reactions of every other character. The Chester focused chapters were the hardest to read, the dark side of the drug world is terrifying! Well done with writing him.
In summary another great story and I do hope you still write, maybe not fanfics anymore but something real and I could put on my shelf
From: hit_n_run_me
Date: 2016-02-03
Chapter: 37
I randomly signed back into my account on this site for the first time in ages and was so happy/surprised that you're still updating this story! I've started to do a re read of high school divide and it really bought me back to when I read it in 2005/06 and its surprising how much of it I remember now rereading it. Well done, it's still such a good story, and thanks for the update
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2016-01-07
Chapter: 37
So sorry I'm running late in my reviewing, but holy damn this update made my whole week, it was so good I read it through twice! When Ryan showed up I nearly choked, I was NOT expecting him to just casually pop in like that, I wasn't even 100% sure Ryan was still after Chester until that scene... Poor Ches though, I just wanted to cry for him with the way he reacted to the heroin, and just the whole situation. It was completely understandable, but I suppose that doesn't make things any easier for him. He just gets discouraged so quickly, and I can feel the helplessness of everyone around him trying to help. I think Nicky's reaction was a bit extreme, but again, understandable after what she's gone through with the Cheser/Eve situation. I just hope she doesn't do or say something she regrets in her fear for his safety. It was also really nice to hear from Rob again, I love the comic relief he brought with accidentally buying the drum kit, I love drunk Rob! But then it was worrying that even he couldn't really cheer up Chester... The most heartbreaking thing was the ending, when Chester said he needed Mike to watch him. I know what it's like to be in that position, and it just makes me relate to and care for him even more.
Well, you did a totally awesome job with this chapter, as always. This (and HSD) is still my favorite story on LPF, and I'll be very, very sad the day it ends. Also, CONGRATULATIONS on getting married, I wish you utmost happiness! I'll be waiting patiently for your next update, I'm so excited to see what happens next...
From: Sinem
Date: 2015-12-28
Chapter: 37
You can't imagine how happy I got when I saw that you updated! Thank you for giving us another great chapter! I really don't want this story to end. Ever. Also, congratulations on getting married!
From: Samy
Date: 2015-12-26
Chapter: 37
Lovely chapter, i teared up a bit with Robs confession, but nevertheless I really enjoyed this chapter, getting to see how everyone wants to help Chester and the conclusions each one of them get to, very well written and interesting.
AND CONGRATS ON GETTING MARRIED THATS AWESOME:D ALSO MERRY CHRISTMAS! Thank you for continuing to write this story, you are the best <3!
From: paula orlandini
Date: 2015-12-21
Chapter: 37
Thanks to this new chapter! I waited so long!
Congratulations on your wedding! Best wishes!
This chapter is poignant .... all are suffering not only Chester and Mike but also Dan, Niki, Peter and now Rob.
The pain spreads like a circle in the water ...
I am very concerned about Chester: he will find the strength to react?
Please ...... a happy ending !!! You give me hope!
Thanks again!!!
From: Sinem
Date: 2015-11-10
Chapter: 36
This story is so good. In my opinion it should be a real book. It would be so awesome if you changed their names and published it. It's just so, so good.
Anyway, this is my favorite story and I hope you will update soon. :)
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2015-06-26
Chapter: 36
I hope it was just Chester's hullcination. I dont want to see Ryan the bastard in my life again...FUCK OFF
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From: Darlene
Date: 2025-02-02
Chapter: 41
NEW CHAPTER LET'S GOOOOOO LIFE MAKES SENSE AGAIN 🖤